Recent Comments

Lavender Lad
5/23/23, 11:40 PM
Very hot though I felt that there were alot of repeated sentences and padding which made me skip around a little. Could definitely use a little trimming down and it would be gold.

5/24/23, 6:07 AM
@[Lavender Lad](/user/show/10019272) Thank you. I appreciate every comment to improve my writing!

5/24/23, 1:43 PM
@[FantasyWhispers](/user/show/921620) On the contrary, I find the power of your text in the details you describe. It's a change from one-shots where the construction of the characters and scenes is botched to get to the sex scene immediately. Well done, it's a great job!

5/24/23, 3:10 PM
@[Orientalism](/user/show/10020050) Thank you really much. I've read lots of stories. I've always thought that many of them always needed a lot of imagination to immerse fully in the scenery (and very often they are just sex). I decided to start writing stories in which the atmosphere and details, such as bodies or expressions, are the core, to better help the reader's imagination.
5/24/23, 3:03 PM
Nicely written, great concept!
5/24/23, 2:53 PM
To be a kid he needed to lose his body hair & also take a cock in his ass.
5/24/23, 12:31 PM
Oh god, this is so hot

5/24/23, 2:32 PM
@[Catcat](/user/show/620382) Thank you:)
Gingcub
5/23/23, 5:59 PM
Fucking incredible! Love the concept and execution. Thoroughly hoping for sequels and more stories from you.

TJ
5/24/23, 2:42 AM
@[Gingcub](/user/show/10000534) Thank you!! I hope to do some more sequels when I think of more ways to be mean with the concept >:). I have a few other series in mind but none have a finished chapter yet.

Gingcub
5/24/23, 10:00 AM
@TJ I keep coming back to this to reread. I think it’s made me cum 5 times in the last 24 hours.

5/24/23, 2:32 PM
@[Gingcub](/user/show/10000534) Wow!! Working hard at it :) glad you enjoyed so much!
5/8/23, 6:14 PM
The next chapter is going to be about Jerod's past year at the college to fill in that gap. It's going to a long chapter and I'm taking my time to try not make it so... predictable. It was a tough choice not to make it its own story but I feel a hefty chapter or two would be more appropriate. It also gives me a break from the current harem but continue building this world at the same time. Not sure on chapter's release, but it will hopefully be this week.

TheOne
5/15/23, 9:16 PM
@[Podoki](/user/show/10019051) A chapter to fill up on the year that Jerod had is definitely a great addition, as there was a huge time skip. Take your time and enjoy :)

5/15/23, 9:43 PM
@[TheOne](/user/show/10018186) Thanks, I was trying to get it out last Friday but I greatly underestimated the task at hand. I want to get this missing chapter just right in terms of sexy funtime and storytelling. I don’t know when it’ll be out but I haven’t stopped working on it.

Anonymous
5/22/23, 3:39 PM
@[Podoki](/user/show/10019051) So when can we expect the new chapter to arrive?

TheOne
5/24/23, 1:14 PM
@[Podoki](/user/show/10019051) Take your time, its definetly gonna be extremely hot! ;)
5/23/23, 2:38 PM
Damn, I can't help but keep coming back to this chapter. Re-reading how rubber pup Callum (I love what Billy did to him) was so quick to screw over this friend for a chance to cum. And Jake just having to take it. It is such a powerful change in dynamics between them.

5/24/23, 10:23 AM
@[Marik29](/user/show/10021139) Thank you, mate! So glad you enjoyed! This was definitely a fun chapter to write!
5/24/23, 3:52 AM
As always, a great story and a great turn on

5/24/23, 6:11 AM
@[mjkuhl](/user/show/10020940) Thanks man
5/24/23, 5:29 AM
I DID NOT UNDERSTAND ANYTHING, "HAHAHAHA BUT I COULDN'T UNDERSTAND THIS STORY AND I THOUGHT IT WAS A JOKE, HAHAHAHA I THINK I'M GOING TO GO OUT FOR A WHILE TO CLEAR MYSELF AND GO RUNNING THROUGH THE PARK MAYBE THAT'S WHAT IT WAS AFTER ALL, AND WHILE THE PROTAGONIST WALKS THROUGH A DARK AND MYSTERIOUS TUNNEL A HEAVY WARMTH WENT THROUGH HIS BODY SLOWLY AND LITTLE BY LITTLE HIS ORIGINAL SPORTS CLOTHES WERE REFORMED WHILE HIS BODY WIDENED AND GROWN AND WHEN COMING OUT FROM THE OTHER SIDE, AN IMPOSING FIGURE CAME UP IN A SKIN-TIGHT BLACK LYCRA-LIKE PANTS AND T-SHIRT LONG SLEEVE THAT APPEARED TO BE PRAYING BA A PRAYER OF MASCULINITY IN EVERY CORNER OF HIS NOW NEW BODY WHICH APPEARS TO BE A LEGENDARY WORK MADE BY A TEMPLE OF DESIRE OF THE HANDSOME MACHO... ; FLAUNTING HIS COCK WHICH WAS GETTING LARGER AND STANDING UP IN THE FAINT MOONLIGHT AND OF INVISIBLE CURIOUS WITNESSES..." I THINK THAT A SEXY STORY OF TRANSFORMATION WOULD HAVE BEEN BETTER THAT WAY
Lampshade15
5/24/23, 12:54 AM
This story gets more and more stimulating, already looking forward to the next chapter!

5/24/23, 5:39 AM
Hopefully I find time to write in the next few weeks! @[Lampshade15](/user/show/277649)