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Anonymous
5/23/23, 10:09 PM
Masterpiece!

TJ
5/24/23, 2:45 AM
@Anonymous 😳 😣 🥺👉👈 really?
5/23/23, 8:04 PM
Great time

TJ
5/24/23, 2:43 AM
@[GiveInToTheMusk](/user/show/909380) Hope it made you hard or happy >;)
Anonymous
5/23/23, 6:57 PM
Wicked twisted! A good tale for sure

TJ
5/24/23, 2:43 AM
@Anonymous I love a good twist, hopefully it was easy to follow and still hot
5/22/23, 12:30 AM
Loved the romantic aspect and the unknowingly affected angle. This is a great addition to the JPS series! Hot as hell, too. I really enjoy thinking of the small but hung cheerer taking care of all these jocks living with needy holes.

5/24/23, 2:17 AM
@[Evan Jackson](/user/show/133763) Thanks! I think a bit of my love of unaware changes slipped in, even though this isn't a reality change story.
5/21/23, 10:46 PM
I know this reads like a one-shot but I’d genuinely love to see a continuation of this that shows and explores Bark and Mutt’s relationship more!

5/24/23, 2:16 AM
@[ls1999](/user/show/2758081) No specific plans for this at the moment, but I wouldn't mind revisiting these characters, or letting Mr. Walker do something with them.
5/21/23, 6:58 PM
hahahaha one of my favorite stories combined with my favorite author. love it

5/24/23, 2:15 AM
@[revenge88fics](/user/show/917832) Glad Walker and I could make that happen :wink:.
5/20/23, 11:59 PM
Ooh yeah this was hot. What a sexy story!

5/24/23, 2:14 AM
@[Heru Kane](/user/show/56823) Thanks!
Sebastián Apollo
5/20/23, 11:53 PM
Concur with the other commenter, I love role reversals where twinky dudes ram some serious jock ass. Good job balancing between witty back-and-forths and sexy action and a fine addition to the JPS universe! Bravo!

5/24/23, 2:14 AM
@[Sebastián Apollo](/user/show/10029736) Thanks! It was fun to write in somebody else's world for a change.
5/20/23, 2:26 PM
Fuuuuuck, soooo hot love that tiny twink hauling around a monster cock to fuck jock holes with

5/24/23, 2:14 AM
@[DannyStorm](/user/show/10002076) It's definitely not my usual dynamic. Glad you liked it!
5/22/23, 3:07 AM
If memory serves (and I'm sorry if I'm remembering incorrectly) the original Cycle One story actually has no actual sex in it. I don't mind no actual sex. The original Pollination story by AbsMan420 also has no actual MM sex and that's a huge go-to story for me. So I like a lot off stories with no actual sex in them. I'm looking for the physical and mental transformations, changes in personality, guys who have been affected betraying other guys they once called friends to get them changed too. Stuff like that. I hope some of that stuff is coming in future chapters. In this one I was more than a little distracted from the story by the very specific attention to details about the ethnic food etc.

5/24/23, 2:02 AM
@[Pwrliftermscl](/user/show/941605) Thanks for the comment. I'm a no-sex writer by nature, for me it's about the control. I'm trying my best to honor the original but put my unique spin on it. There will be the whole spreading and changing in personalities. Sorry that the dinner had too much focus for your liking; that's the one and only time dinner comes up in the story as I far as I have planned. But one thing to be aware is the change in attitude towards Eric, that Matthew begins to feel that Eric is someone he can be comfortable with. That's the start of the change. I'll try to live up to the original, thank you for supporting the work.