Recent Comments

Sebastián Apollo
5/20/23, 11:53 PM
Concur with the other commenter, I love role reversals where twinky dudes ram some serious jock ass. Good job balancing between witty back-and-forths and sexy action and a fine addition to the JPS universe! Bravo!

5/24/23, 2:14 AM
@[Sebastián Apollo](/user/show/10029736) Thanks! It was fun to write in somebody else's world for a change.
5/20/23, 2:26 PM
Fuuuuuck, soooo hot love that tiny twink hauling around a monster cock to fuck jock holes with

5/24/23, 2:14 AM
@[DannyStorm](/user/show/10002076) It's definitely not my usual dynamic. Glad you liked it!
5/22/23, 3:07 AM
If memory serves (and I'm sorry if I'm remembering incorrectly) the original Cycle One story actually has no actual sex in it. I don't mind no actual sex. The original Pollination story by AbsMan420 also has no actual MM sex and that's a huge go-to story for me. So I like a lot off stories with no actual sex in them. I'm looking for the physical and mental transformations, changes in personality, guys who have been affected betraying other guys they once called friends to get them changed too. Stuff like that. I hope some of that stuff is coming in future chapters. In this one I was more than a little distracted from the story by the very specific attention to details about the ethnic food etc.

5/24/23, 2:02 AM
@[Pwrliftermscl](/user/show/941605) Thanks for the comment. I'm a no-sex writer by nature, for me it's about the control. I'm trying my best to honor the original but put my unique spin on it. There will be the whole spreading and changing in personalities. Sorry that the dinner had too much focus for your liking; that's the one and only time dinner comes up in the story as I far as I have planned. But one thing to be aware is the change in attitude towards Eric, that Matthew begins to feel that Eric is someone he can be comfortable with. That's the start of the change. I'll try to live up to the original, thank you for supporting the work.
Anonymous
5/24/23, 1:53 AM
What are friends for? This. This is what friends are for. Maybe once Ethan's learned the ropes he can show Stephen how real bros show they care.
5/23/23, 5:17 AM
willie how do you make hot and sexy stories so fast please teach us your skill :pray:

Willie Cici
5/24/23, 1:46 AM
@[temporaryhotsaucetofu](/user/show/10034005) I've been working on this and others for the good of a year. There's nothing fast about good writing and editing. But, thanks for the compliment. I appreciate it.
May 21, 2023
5/24/23, 1:34 AM
I would definitely love to see this story continued or prequeled!
5/24/23, 1:28 AM
Anyone else think there should be a single spin off on how Chad's night went... :eyes::smiling_imp:
5/24/23, 1:03 AM
This is freaking amazing!!!
Kipper
5/24/23, 12:25 AM
OK, whatever...
5/24/23, 12:10 AM
This is the hottest and sexiest story I have read in awhile! Ethan’s full transformation is gonna be good. (Prediction: When Ethan wears a singlet and full wrestler garb his transformation will be complete. That is why Ryan hasn’t been putting them out. He has to save the most potent one for Ethan’s transformation to be complete.)