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Anonymous
5/23/23, 12:02 AM
Great story, bad grammar.
5/22/23, 11:15 PM
I hope part 3 will be coming soon.
5/22/23, 11:05 PM
Incredibly hot and sext tale
5/22/23, 7:10 PM
Sad to see that there is no update here and lo-fi. I feel bad for paying customers
3/8/23, 5:17 PM
I have to wonder how Oscar got three wishes done in one night? As I understood the rules said basically no consolidation of wishes or multiple wishes, it had to be one wish per night.

Sebastián Apollo
3/8/23, 5:54 PM
@[Wolfboy77](/user/show/10002587) Oscar made _three separate_ wishes, using his (then) virgin blood to sacrifice for them, and falling asleep between each wish. Remember, Marcos also made two wishes in a single night. First he got his massive dick, and then he wished for a hot new body - both those were achieved within a single night. Thank you for being such an astute reader though, haha! I appreciate it! 😉

3/14/23, 10:44 PM
@The Author (name hidden due to challenge) OK thanks for clearing that up I must've accidentally misread that part as I was reading.:thumbsup: I wonder will you be writing about Joaquin’s and/or Oscar's time with the book? I ask because I'm interested in how their wishes affected them as they were granted.

Sebastián Apollo
3/14/23, 11:24 PM
@[Wolfboy77](/user/show/10002587) Those are interesting proposals. I was originally planning this as only a oneshot, but I'll put the ideas of a possible prequel and sequel down in my notes!

5/22/23, 6:58 PM
@[Sebastián Apollo](/user/show/10029736) Sorry for the incredibly late reply, but I've got a little idea for the sequel part if you're interested. It's mostly about the book. Basically when Oscar found the book and reads it, he finds a warning/recommendation for those who aren't virgins themselves when it comes to the virgin blood sacrifice that was either: hidden, skimmed over, or ignored. It would say that using the blood of an unwilling or forcibly taken will result in nightmares that increase in intensity and painful transformations if they affect the physical body until the wish/wishes are either made permanent or undone. However, using the blood of a willing person leads to more pleasant experiences. Since Oscar didn't complain about nightmares or suffering any pain like how it was for his older brothers when their wishes were granted. I'd figure that this could be a decent explanation for the lack of such complaints. That and how magic is usually in my perspective about intent and willingness in order to work otherwise either they don't work, are less powerful, or they can have unexpected problems.
Kipper
5/22/23, 6:16 PM
"Wyatt removed his clothes," but then the doctor had to unzip Wyatt's trousers. I'm a stickler for continuity.
5/22/23, 3:04 PM
i LOVE this story so much. THANK YOU for your great writing.
5/22/23, 3:02 PM
Second favorite story you’ve ever written!
5/15/23, 7:00 AM
Sounds like the boys just wanna have fun! Great to see you’re continuing the series!

5/22/23, 2:38 PM
@[Delicious1papaya](/user/show/964605) The boys' priority is always having fun, as they should. Glad you liked it!
jay
5/22/23, 2:35 PM
amazing cant wait foir more