Recent Comments

5/20/23, 7:09 PM
I can only echo what everyone else has said; you came in with a very good introduction to you and your writing. I thoroughly enjoyed it and look forward to seeing what comes next.
5/20/23, 6:46 PM
What a great start! Would’ve not have guessed this is just your first story given level of detail and slow buildup.
Anonymous
5/20/23, 6:44 PM
good story with focus on hypnosis. Let us see more
Anonymous
5/20/23, 6:34 PM
Absolutely LOVE what you’re setting up here! Really hope it’s not the last we see of Anton, Paul and Clay. But more importantly, really hope this isn’t the last we see of you as a writer :)
Nico
5/20/23, 6:29 PM
Amazing first story! I'm looking forward to more misadventures within the workplace, definitely wish I could program my employees~
5/20/23, 6:00 PM
This is a great story to make your debut with! I hope we get to see more of Clay and his new stable of obedient wage slaves haha
5/20/23, 4:54 PM
I absolutely loved the first half of this. Freddy's journey of self discovery, untangling which things were his fault and which were the rock's, and the way you could see him regaining control. Made the whole journey worth it. Uri is the antagonist, and the type of guy a lot of people know in real life and dislike, but seeing him feel inferior to a literal dildo does a great job of showing his interiority and making him sympathetic, right before he does something absolutely monstrous and selfish. He comes off as Sex obsessed, but i think that's a combination of enjoying it, bottom daze cutting his anxieties, and viewing it as the only thing people like about him. So he turns himself into the ideal bottom, hoping that earns him love. I still don't like him (which isn't necessary) but i how he can come to the same self discovery as Freddy and find happiness.
5/20/23, 4:18 PM
You need to expand this story into more chapters.
5/20/23, 3:59 PM
Omg you have no idea how much you make me HATE Uri. He’s such a prick, robbing our protagonist from all of his personal growth. I was rooting so hard for Freddy until Uri made that fucking wish. GOD DAMN IT. I really hope Freddy gets out and away from this abusive, immoral and stupid roommate of his. GOD Uri makes me mad! I really hope this ends well for Freddy and that Uri finally gets some taste of his own medicine. After all, Uri is so superficial he doesn’t want love but only sex. It infuriates me so much. The fucker doesn’t deserve love or a happy ending. Poor Bryant, maybe he’s in love with Uri, but he doesn’t have an ounce of an idea how TRASH that guy is. Anyway, I can’t wait to see how this story ends! I really hope it ends well for Freddy, but this chapter seems to leave little hope for that (especially with the few times Freddy mentioned he lost and Uri won). I feel so bad for Freddy :( Loved the buildup and how vivid you depict the characters (hence why my hate for Uri is so strong LOL). Keep up the great work!