Another great chapter. I am pretty confident that Matt wants both revenge and Jake. Hopefully he does becomes Jake's master; he knows how to give and take. For Jake, it feels like it could still go either way, accepting his new place or fighting it. It will be interesting what twists that brings. And for Callum, a jock turned rubber gimp pup is awesome! A muscled alpha jock now on all fours in black rubber is the best! The pills in his system is a clever sadistic twist over caging him too. Definitely hope to read more of him too. I wonder if there is anything left of Callum in there?

I just came around reading this. Every series of yours is really, I mean **really** special. This chapter is starting so disturbing and hard to read, something you'd not expect on a site like this. And then it turns into a fairy tale, creating a background for the previous chapters. And an *amazing* sex scene at the end. I'm afraid so many people won't ever make it to the end of your story, as they might be discouraged by the first 2 thirds of the story. Most people are looking to wank here, and I'm afraid your stories are like lost gems around here. I'm so happy that you post the stories on our sites and I can only hope that they'll find the audience and appreciation they deserve. I'm looking forward to the followup chapters!

I’ll start by commenting, hoping I haven’t before, on how much Nu’s writing has improved. There is so much character development in this story, and it’s so well done. I love Linden’s Throne, but this story is so much smoother and the character beats tug so much harder on the right part of my feels. I love the character development in this story as a whole, but especially this chapter in particular. Freddy working through his feelings and figuring himself out, and confronting his feelings and the things he’s been ignoring, is great and relatable. And it was satisfying to see Freddy confront some truths about himself. I’ve been waiting for that and wanting it for a few chapters at least now. Reminds me of an argument between two married characters on Succession recently. It was really cathartic. Besides the Freddy of it all, Uri revealing some really big shit about himself, and not reflecting on it at all, is also great. And then Uri, in predictable Uri fashion, makes a stupid wish that eliminates even the possibility of Freddy actually even proving that he likes Uri. So now he didn’t get what he really wanted and was scared to ask for, and he’s made his own prophecy true, because how is Freddy going to forgive this? Pretending that Nu didn’t have a happy ending in mind. Speaking of happy endings… Freddy having his agency taken away wasn’t horrifying to me because a) it was really hot b) he finds it really hot and doesn’t have enough time to dwell on it because of the pheromones and c) I’m confident that Nu has a happy ending in mind and that’s what Freddy’s wish is going to result in. Bryant being there is going to change things. Bryant being a room mate now is going to change things. I actually love character assassination stories. It’s a guilty pleasure, but only works for me if I know the character’s destroyed can reclaim their identity, or if the characters are so shallow that I don’t care about them. In this story, Nu balanced things perfectly so that I care about Freddy and it felt like maybe he’s fucked (being not fucked) but I’m so confident that his wish at the end will change things for all of them in a positive way that I’m not bothered at all by Freddy’s sudden change into a himbo. Ok, besides all of that, or partially because of it, it was an incredibly hot chapter again. Freddy getting checked out by guys when walking around in the Tom of Finland outfit is hot. Then him getting turned on thinking about it and jerking off in the changing room, is hot. Then getting turned into a fuck machine stud top, is hot. Even his reaction to Bryant showing up and trying to be honest with Bryant but unable to stop himself from being happy and excited about fucking Uri some more, is hot. I’m very eager to read the next and final chapter. I am deliberately not guessing at what Freddy’s wish was, so that I’m surprised by it. I’m excited to see how all 3 of the roommates end up. I’m also not saying I expect more, but I am excited to think that this might not be the last thing that Nu writes and that he’ll still write more stories as good as or better than this. I’m am very happy this was continued and done so well. I am interested in anything Nu writes but this is definitely my favorite so far.

Nice start! Very intrigued to see where this leads.

Like the slow burn. Almost like edging since we know the premise this story is based. Keep going.

I can only echo what everyone else has said; you came in with a very good introduction to you and your writing. I thoroughly enjoyed it and look forward to seeing what comes next.

What a great start! Would’ve not have guessed this is just your first story given level of detail and slow buildup.

good story with focus on hypnosis. Let us see more

Absolutely LOVE what you’re setting up here! Really hope it’s not the last we see of Anton, Paul and Clay. But more importantly, really hope this isn’t the last we see of you as a writer :)

Amazing first story! I'm looking forward to more misadventures within the workplace, definitely wish I could program my employees~