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5/20/23, 4:54 PM
I absolutely loved the first half of this. Freddy's journey of self discovery, untangling which things were his fault and which were the rock's, and the way you could see him regaining control. Made the whole journey worth it. Uri is the antagonist, and the type of guy a lot of people know in real life and dislike, but seeing him feel inferior to a literal dildo does a great job of showing his interiority and making him sympathetic, right before he does something absolutely monstrous and selfish. He comes off as Sex obsessed, but i think that's a combination of enjoying it, bottom daze cutting his anxieties, and viewing it as the only thing people like about him. So he turns himself into the ideal bottom, hoping that earns him love. I still don't like him (which isn't necessary) but i how he can come to the same self discovery as Freddy and find happiness.
5/20/23, 4:18 PM
You need to expand this story into more chapters.
5/20/23, 3:59 PM
Omg you have no idea how much you make me HATE Uri. He’s such a prick, robbing our protagonist from all of his personal growth. I was rooting so hard for Freddy until Uri made that fucking wish. GOD DAMN IT. I really hope Freddy gets out and away from this abusive, immoral and stupid roommate of his. GOD Uri makes me mad! I really hope this ends well for Freddy and that Uri finally gets some taste of his own medicine. After all, Uri is so superficial he doesn’t want love but only sex. It infuriates me so much. The fucker doesn’t deserve love or a happy ending. Poor Bryant, maybe he’s in love with Uri, but he doesn’t have an ounce of an idea how TRASH that guy is. Anyway, I can’t wait to see how this story ends! I really hope it ends well for Freddy, but this chapter seems to leave little hope for that (especially with the few times Freddy mentioned he lost and Uri won). I feel so bad for Freddy :( Loved the buildup and how vivid you depict the characters (hence why my hate for Uri is so strong LOL). Keep up the great work!
5/20/23, 1:21 PM
Great start ! Hope Max will make Alex into leather too :wink:

5/20/23, 2:40 PM
@[John Kuir](/user/show/588303) Hey, thank you for your feedback and for your idea. I'm always pleased to get new inputs for my story. I will surely consider leather too :grin:
5/20/23, 2:39 PM
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KhrizzzToePhur
5/20/23, 2:39 PM
Oh Hypno thrill... You've done it again... 💦
5/20/23, 2:34 PM
II am so happy of your story ratings :heart_eyes: If you think this chapter is hot and full of mind controlling, you can't imagine what Chapter 4 - Mindfucked Muscle Show is. > Dumblex released a guttural moan as he felt me enter him, his body stiffening against the exquisite invasion. His muscles clenched as he acclimatized to the sensation, his face a cocktail of intense pleasure and the exertion of holding the plank. > "Now, Dumblex," I whispered, my voice a velvety murmur against his ear, "I want you to do push-ups. And while you're at it, stroke yourself. I want to see those muscles in your arms work double-time. I want you to show me how strong you really are." I will post Chapter 3 - Dumblex here soon, check out my [profile](https://onlyfans.com/606868020/fantasy_whispers) to read it now before anyone else!
5/20/23, 2:27 PM
yay, great chapter
5/20/23, 1:41 PM
Such tender, true love. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

CasualWanderer82
5/20/23, 2:21 PM
@[NeedControlling](/user/show/1223696) ❤️