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5/17/23, 3:16 AM
Over and over and over, hot hot hot hot hot HOT!
5/17/23, 2:15 AM
Oh, I have been WAITING for this--and it didn't disappoint. "Twice-told-tales"--the same story retold from multiple perspectives--are among my favorites, but they're very tricky to pull off...and this was PERFECT! Seeing the previous events of the story--the first practice with Coach, the discovery in the bathroom stall, the first time Sammy fucked Luke--from Sammy's perspective, in all of its confusion and longing, completely reshape how we see those chapters. And I love how you paint Sammy with so many dimensions: a fuckboy with a heart, someone motivated above all by love but not afraid of the sexual aspect of that love. Even Anwar gets a bit of development, which speaks volumes about your ability to provide excellent characterization with just a few sentences. Thank you for sharing your gift with us! :)

5/17/23, 2:30 AM
@[Feed Your Head](/user/show/1170832) “Fuckboy with a heart” oh my god that’s exactly Sammy haha Glad you enjoyed. You’re one of my most enthusiastic readers and you always give great comments, so thank you for that.
5/17/23, 12:30 AM
Could you do more stories like this it was great

5/17/23, 2:03 AM
@[Muscle theft lover](/user/show/10025522) Chances are good I will write something similar.
Anonymous
5/17/23, 2:02 AM
So good and amazing is there possibility for more?
Anonymous
5/17/23, 12:54 AM
You knocked it out of the park with this one. Great character work! While the erotic bits were brief and recaps, you still managed to make them fresh and super hot. Can’t wait to see what comes next!
5/17/23, 12:32 AM
Any chance that u could do like pt3 and 4 or 5 because these two story were so fucking amazing but just alittle short hope this isn't the end of this story because wow it was amazing and a new idea great idea
Mar 21, 2021
Anonymous
5/17/23, 12:22 AM
Sequel… need sequel!
5/17/23, 12:17 AM
Hell ya......
5/16/23, 11:33 PM
I am very glad things like this aren’t actually possible with hypnosis.
5/16/23, 6:49 PM
For not having English as a first language, this is a great attempt to tackle a classic storyline! Keep up the good work! You're definitely developing as a writer, and I'm looking forward to reading more of your work!

5/16/23, 11:23 PM
@[Ganymede and Co.](/user/show/956270) Thanks, I hope you also enjoyed my another stories.