Recent Comments

5/16/23, 4:25 AM
Hey, man! I congratulate you on writing this super hot dumb jock story, and not letting any language barrier stop you. I’m not a native English speaker myself and I suffer from a lot of typos, but I only got better the more and more I wrote, so please, never stop! I would only recommend you send the story to someone you trust first, I think this will go a long way in helping you improve your writing :) And yes, I definitely want to read more, and fast! Not only I want to see how Noah will trick Jake into fucking his sweet twink ass with his huge cock, but I also want to see Noah being a manipulative, slutty bottom to all of Jake’s dumb, hung jock friends! Can’t wait for more! Thanks for your awesome story!

5/16/23, 11:20 PM
@[Elmara](/user/show/910352) Great that you like my story and yeah you know what I think for the continuation of this story😁
Anonymous
5/15/23, 9:48 PM
Hot! Keep going! Noah just found out by his “doctor” that he needs his hole stretched regularly and what better tool to use than Jacks 12 inch cock

5/16/23, 11:16 PM
@Anonymous Thank you, I will consider it in my next stories.
5/16/23, 10:01 PM
need more chapterssssss :drooling_face:
5/16/23, 9:57 PM
extraordinary...
5/16/23, 9:42 PM
Please do continue
5/16/23, 4:01 PM
Welcome back; good to see you back writing stories. I still owe you stories for the Rubber Empire series, but you are dealing with a subject matter in _Defenders of The Earth_ that I've thought about for a long time. For me it's the animated cartoon, not the comic book. So I'll see what I can come up with to help expand your series.

5/16/23, 9:39 PM
@[New Guy in Town](/user/show/820450) Can't wait to Read your addition of both story's;)))
5/16/23, 11:26 AM
I have to say, it left me wanting more, so is this the end of the story?Still well written, but I was surprised to see a story about AI ending with a sex zombie.I was expecting a more sci-fi ending. And I thought the ending would be a little more sci-fi, and Piper was like a wizard who brought the boys into the world and left them alone. Finally, thank you for your story and look forward to more writing from you.

Anonymous
5/16/23, 12:09 PM
@[GoJia](/user/show/23538) Oh,.. that's not the end. But, for the pair right now, it really feels like it. At one point the start of the next chapter was stuck on the end here. That clarified things better, but was still jarring. The whole next chapter was supposed to be here, but... Greed. There was no way it was close to fitting. So, don't worry; this is just a fake-out ending. The truth follows,...

5/16/23, 1:12 PM
@Anonymous Oops,... Identity crisis here. ^Yes this was me :3

5/16/23, 4:08 PM
@[Blazargus](/user/show/10012784) Oh, that's great XD I thought you said earlier that the story only has four chapters.

5/16/23, 4:58 PM
@[GoJia](/user/show/23538) Oh, I certainly did! I can't count; not in terms of chapters or words :p I got this far into the chapter and realized I hadn't even gotten to the point yet, so,... yeah. Another chapter is coming. You could call this an interlude, if you like. Then there would only be one more REAL chapter when I said it :3
hairyartist
5/16/23, 4:51 PM
I love it, thank you
5/16/23, 4:42 PM
Where do you volunteer?
hairyartist
5/16/23, 4:34 PM
Thank you for the great chapter and series!