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5/4/23, 9:46 PM
so deliciously hot!

5/15/23, 8:23 PM
@[temporaryhotsaucetofu](/user/show/10034005) thank you :)
3/7/21, 8:24 PM
It's a good idea but you would really benefit from an editor.

5/15/23, 8:21 PM
@[Centipix](/user/show/726207) hi, just reedit the story in cooperation with a editor. :)
5/15/23, 8:08 PM
This is one of the most interesting premises I have stumbled upon in this website. I curious to see where this will go next!
Martin
5/15/23, 8:02 PM
I hope this is just the beginning of an amazing series!
Kippers
5/15/23, 6:45 PM
Only one chapter in, but I'm already hoping Adams has many more episodes of his depravity, and that he lusts for as many available cocks as his bigoted body can accommodate! You keep up with the hot writing, and I'll keep things up on my end. 😉
5/15/23, 6:22 PM
Firstly, hot! Well done and enjoyable. My one aww was he had a butt in front of him and he didn't rim it and play with it. Hehe Also I'm all for helping the brother. I think him being a helpful good boy too would be great. Fun saga!
5/15/23, 6:05 PM
Love everything about this story! Hot cop getting his comeuppance! Fuck yeah
May 14, 2023
5/15/23, 4:18 PM
Nice. I'd love to see more transformations coming in this story
5/15/23, 4:13 PM
Great addition to the collections. I especially like how he pretend to be hard to please while enjoying the slave's desperate attempt to please his master. I also like how the slave's mind voice were very contradictory to how he present himself to his master. The scene where the slave licking his cum could be more detailed and elaborate I guess. The act of licking cum itself could be something that normally people detest or find it hard to do, in particular licking the floor could be describe as a lower-rung behavior. So I was thinking that the scene was quite anticlimactic; a bit more struggle inwardly if the hold of the hypnosis was quite powerful. Even if it was detestable or disgusting, he can do everything the master order and desires. I'm expecting what kind of shenanigans Dexter would do to the two brothers. Comparing physique and scrambling for their master's attention? It would be more fun if there were competitions between them.
5/15/23, 3:05 PM
Dude! I hope, if at some time you choose to continue this story, I would be interested to see if Brett will get a visit from Alejandro and his golden coin?