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Kippers
5/15/23, 6:45 PM
Only one chapter in, but I'm already hoping Adams has many more episodes of his depravity, and that he lusts for as many available cocks as his bigoted body can accommodate! You keep up with the hot writing, and I'll keep things up on my end. 😉
5/15/23, 6:22 PM
Firstly, hot! Well done and enjoyable. My one aww was he had a butt in front of him and he didn't rim it and play with it. Hehe Also I'm all for helping the brother. I think him being a helpful good boy too would be great. Fun saga!
5/15/23, 6:05 PM
Love everything about this story! Hot cop getting his comeuppance! Fuck yeah
May 14, 2023
5/15/23, 4:18 PM
Nice. I'd love to see more transformations coming in this story
5/15/23, 4:13 PM
Great addition to the collections. I especially like how he pretend to be hard to please while enjoying the slave's desperate attempt to please his master. I also like how the slave's mind voice were very contradictory to how he present himself to his master. The scene where the slave licking his cum could be more detailed and elaborate I guess. The act of licking cum itself could be something that normally people detest or find it hard to do, in particular licking the floor could be describe as a lower-rung behavior. So I was thinking that the scene was quite anticlimactic; a bit more struggle inwardly if the hold of the hypnosis was quite powerful. Even if it was detestable or disgusting, he can do everything the master order and desires. I'm expecting what kind of shenanigans Dexter would do to the two brothers. Comparing physique and scrambling for their master's attention? It would be more fun if there were competitions between them.
5/15/23, 3:05 PM
Dude! I hope, if at some time you choose to continue this story, I would be interested to see if Brett will get a visit from Alejandro and his golden coin?
Kipper
5/15/23, 2:40 PM
Excellent idea, and you should take it further, even after all these years. Those dreams of pretty pink pussy seem to have dissipated, but should propel the hapless patient to desiring that skinny cunt. He should enjoy getting his tongue into that gaping cavern, so he can enjoy and delight in its flavors. Let his lust build, as the doctor denies his cock entry to that moist, alluring fuckhole. Perhaps customers at the shop begin to notice his fruit-flavored beard, degrading him. Perhaps the good doctor, in a fit of horniness, will plunge that coochie down on the mechanic's stiff meat. Perhaps it will take some demands from his prissy Skype friend, who is eager to see that cock fill up another hole. The Skype friend might even visit to sample this docile patient's ability to fuck like an animal upon command. If he's ever going to learn to "love the fags," there certainly needs to be more than one! Perhaps the patient could join the doctor's group session, with several pansies who have fears of big, strong men. Allowing them to see a hulk of man being tender, and eating their wanton asses before easing his cock into them. It's certainly beneficial to all the patients. I do hope you resume this series. It definitely packs the heat, and I'd like to see if your writing has improved.
5/15/23, 2:30 PM
Yeey, include big military bro
Kipper
5/15/23, 1:48 PM
I agree that there could have been meatier content here, perhaps giving details over several chapters. I grew up with a couple dudes with over 9 inches in their pants, and have met many more since. They all complained that they couldn't fuck women deeply, with their cockheads pounding into the cervix. Some discovered that men could handle more, but not always. It isn't a joy to be hung like that, and some of the stories here with 14-inch cocks basically turn me off. Still, his pubescent years, and a concerned father --whose genetics did, or did not contribute to his ever-growing appendage-- with commiseration of his plight, or jealous appreciation, led to some interesting anecdotes. Some detail of high school faggots who discovered his schlong and shared it, slobbering all over every bit of his crotch would have fit in nicely. Some straight high school stud teammate might have been the only candidate whose meaty ass wanted to get fucked by his giant cock out of mere curiosity. Maybe a college interview, where the dean succumbed to the tube steak hanging from his silky basketball shorts, could have marked the start of his undergraduate career. Being guided to a colleague who could mentor his graduate studies in exchange for tasting his pre-cum on a regular basis. Then, after a variety of such flashbacks, he could finally meet the enterprising Daddy. We never got to read the details of Daddy taking that cock in every imaginable position, both public and private. Anecdotes of some of the specific clients who paid thousands for their experiences with his horsemeat would have rounded out a series of up to 10 chapters! Definitely a missed opportunity here!
Kippers
5/15/23, 1:02 PM
I haven't yet read the second chapter about this arrogant supermodel, and the depraved past he was forced into, but you've already got my cock crying wet tears of endless prejizz. I think it would be great to hear about him on porn sets, but also stories of his manager arranging several investors to be present at modeling shoots for toothpaste and acne cream. Perhaps, they will linger after the photographers and sponsors leave, so they may praise his hard work in group admiration. Maybe, they would coerce him that a pre-shoot meeting is required to confirm if he's the right candidate for a hefty modeling contract. It could be immediately before the shoot, where the photographer finds they don't need to spray his body down to get the right glistening effect for a suntan lotion ad. Keep up the great work on your end, and I'll keep things up on this end. 😉