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5/14/23, 10:51 PM
Hope the come back and find him in a puddle of his own cum
5/14/23, 9:46 PM
This was very, very hot! There will be more parts of it? I think you could easily expand it exploring more of the sex shop or maybe even using stull from other shops. But keep him in his uniform, please.
5/14/23, 8:41 PM
Very intricate and darkly erotic. I loved it!
Anonymous
5/14/23, 8:21 PM
Great story definitely deserves a part 2
john
5/14/23, 5:50 PM
I would like to see Master Peter make the other 3 boys pay for swimming as well.
Cumluvnbottom@yahoo.com
7/7/18, 3:58 PM
I want candy!

Anonymous
5/14/23, 5:48 PM
@Cumluvnbottom@yahoo.com I want candy too
5/14/23, 5:42 PM
I love the last part where you describe his eventual fate.
May 14, 2023
5/14/23, 5:38 PM
This is great, hope to read more of it. Love the humiliation of the shampoo bottle. Guys gotta do what they gotta do.
5/14/23, 4:49 AM
Nice transformation sequence! I'm not sure about the hooves, I tend to associate those more with occult/magical transformations and I think of drones as being a sciency thing. And a small quibble: Five and a half feet tall is well below average (at least for a Caucasian gentleman, which the reader is apt to assume Rick is given that he's blonde). It's best to avoid numbers when describing characters unless it is truly relevant. Saying he is "average height" will work for everyone around the world. Saying he's "an average 5'5" in height" is instantly discordant to anyone from a place where 5'5" is noticeably short.

5/14/23, 11:00 AM
@[amul](/user/show/10003734) Thanks for the feedback! In my defense, I cranked this out in under an hour while drunk and horny, so blame any inconsistencies on that. Also, the hooves and sphincter-mouth are a sort of particular drone aesthetic I have in mind for a greater drone universe that has some alien / hive elements in it. The hivemind sensation I've put in the story is a subtle hint toward that. Those chapters still need to be written, however... if I crank out more of this, I'll probably do some more drone transformations in various settings first before starting to tie up loose ends and pave over plotholes.

5/14/23, 1:52 PM
@[Drone KD-2039](/user/show/2919803) That's great, having a larger backstory/worldbuilding to inform your short stories is a wonderful method to draw readers in.

5/14/23, 5:04 PM
@[amul](/user/show/10003734) I have one about a security guard that I might rework to fit this universe, that's got a bit of world building in it.