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5/13/23, 3:48 PM
So hot that you included a Muslim in your story, they are so rare here...

5/14/23, 11:33 AM
@[Orientalism](/user/show/10020050) If you haven't already, you should check out my story "Welcome to Dicksburg," which has a Muslim protagonist.
5/14/23, 11:10 AM
Jock pussy boy!
5/14/23, 10:59 AM
Well, this story certainly hit the perfect revenge fantasy for me. Very nicely done!
May 14, 2023
5/14/23, 10:24 AM
A series? Great. I like how the virus affects everyone differently.
5/14/23, 10:00 AM
Hey, are you planing to continue it? If yes that would be amazing. If not, it's still a good story to read
5/14/23, 9:19 AM
This is honestly an amazing story, i'm gobbling down on it like crazy whenever there is a new part to it. Can't wait for whatever happens next. I hope jake will come to fully accept his new purpose at some point

5/14/23, 9:32 AM
@[maxwell](/user/show/10002006) Thank you so much, mate. So glad you’re enjoying. All I’ll say is Jake’s in very capable hands😈

Maxwell
5/14/23, 9:46 AM
@[SlaveBoyJG](/user/show/10017787) I feel like he should be required to constantly wear cuffs though. Maybe even dress him up in some rubber. But that's up to you
5/14/23, 8:28 AM
I hope Dyan gets to control, train & fuck Lee, perhaps even be his master.
3/21/23, 4:35 AM
An intriguing start, but it definitely does feel like a first story, as you're struggling with a lot of the common issues that plague first-time authors. Specifically, I noticed a tendency to overexplain relatively trivial points (like the long explanation of why Arthur lives alone, which still doesn't make much sense to me). However, not enough time is spent on characterization; the four men aren't given names or even distinguishing characteristics before they transform, and even after they transform, it's still hard to tell them apart.

5/14/23, 4:38 AM
@[Hypnothrill](/user/show/37386) Woahh, sorry for the late response, thank you for the advice you gave, well, I just afraid that I forgot the details about Arthur that I also forgot about the characterization.
5/13/23, 10:58 AM
God, I was wondering what this title had to do with the Batman series until I remembered that Bruce _(did)_ go by Matches Malone...

Spandexlad
5/14/23, 4:10 AM
@[Allan Weiss](/user/show/472888) Yep, you got it. Also Dick went by Dan Smith in a, I think, more recent story. Since I was hiding Bruce's ID, I also wanted to hide Dick's so I googled if he had any other alias and that was the only one I found.
5/14/23, 4:02 AM
MUST. HAVE. MORE.