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fry
5/11/23, 2:50 AM
Are you working on a new chapter?:smiley:
5/11/23, 2:49 AM
Just perfect.
5/11/23, 1:40 AM
Absolutely brilliant! You've teased us with more on every front, and gave us one very arousing bathroom scene that was still sweet. Loved the twist at the end, the three of them are growing closer and it's so enjoyable to read. Loved the detail when Cody describes his sexuality as imagining himself as the sidekick!

5/11/23, 2:47 AM
@[Essex](/user/show/909447) Well thank you. Cody is so difficult to write because he's such a blend of different viewpoints. Hopefully people are enjoying finding out what is actually going on with the title characters inner thoughts at this point!
5/9/23, 3:28 AM
This really need a continuation woo hoo!

5/11/23, 2:45 AM
@[Hautehawt](/user/show/1009866) Thanks for the encouragement. :)
5/11/23, 12:02 AM
HOT!! And quite interesting... 🤔

5/11/23, 1:32 AM
@[NeedControlling](/user/show/1223696) Thank you! Those are two things I'm very happy to hear :D Hope the next piece continues to entice!
5/11/23, 1:30 AM
Nice though I kinda wish Eli had a program that snapped him out of it like Erik. I'm curious if he would show remorse
5/11/23, 12:19 AM
Sorry, but this is just... it doesn't make any _sense_. Things happen that were never set up (or directly contradict the previous chapter/paragraphs) — even basic, fundamental stuff like John (apparently) offering to give up his own muscle to Jack. That's **never explained** in the story, it's just suddenly what's happening out of nowhere. The procedure — which also starts out of nowhere, one second John and Jack are sitting in the waiting room, the next moment the transfer is already in progress — goes from being a muscle-transference process in chapter 1, to suddenly transferring attributes that have nothing to do with muscle, like bone density and height, in chapter 2. Having an AI generate a starting point for a story is fine, but a human editor still needs to check it for basic coherence afterwards.
Anonymous
5/10/23, 11:55 PM
I hope the bullies would come to like what had happened to them :)
5/10/23, 10:46 PM
Had a lot of fun reading this one!
5/10/23, 6:51 PM
Fun stuff. The sight into Chad's head was nice. Still glad its mostly dom top pov, but views unto subs head is great! I hope Dexter will play with Chad's butt, some rimming would be great! :)