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5/9/23, 3:28 AM
This really need a continuation woo hoo!

5/11/23, 2:45 AM
@[Hautehawt](/user/show/1009866) Thanks for the encouragement. :)
5/11/23, 12:02 AM
HOT!! And quite interesting... 🤔

5/11/23, 1:32 AM
@[NeedControlling](/user/show/1223696) Thank you! Those are two things I'm very happy to hear :D Hope the next piece continues to entice!
5/11/23, 1:30 AM
Nice though I kinda wish Eli had a program that snapped him out of it like Erik. I'm curious if he would show remorse
5/11/23, 12:19 AM
Sorry, but this is just... it doesn't make any _sense_. Things happen that were never set up (or directly contradict the previous chapter/paragraphs) — even basic, fundamental stuff like John (apparently) offering to give up his own muscle to Jack. That's **never explained** in the story, it's just suddenly what's happening out of nowhere. The procedure — which also starts out of nowhere, one second John and Jack are sitting in the waiting room, the next moment the transfer is already in progress — goes from being a muscle-transference process in chapter 1, to suddenly transferring attributes that have nothing to do with muscle, like bone density and height, in chapter 2. Having an AI generate a starting point for a story is fine, but a human editor still needs to check it for basic coherence afterwards.
Anonymous
5/10/23, 11:55 PM
I hope the bullies would come to like what had happened to them :)
5/10/23, 10:46 PM
Had a lot of fun reading this one!
5/10/23, 6:51 PM
Fun stuff. The sight into Chad's head was nice. Still glad its mostly dom top pov, but views unto subs head is great! I hope Dexter will play with Chad's butt, some rimming would be great! :)
5/10/23, 3:25 PM
More please!
Nov 8, 2019
5/10/23, 3:14 PM
OINK!
5/10/23, 2:50 PM
Great story..loving the rubber skinheads!