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5/11/23, 1:30 AM
Nice though I kinda wish Eli had a program that snapped him out of it like Erik. I'm curious if he would show remorse
5/11/23, 12:19 AM
Sorry, but this is just... it doesn't make any _sense_. Things happen that were never set up (or directly contradict the previous chapter/paragraphs) — even basic, fundamental stuff like John (apparently) offering to give up his own muscle to Jack. That's **never explained** in the story, it's just suddenly what's happening out of nowhere. The procedure — which also starts out of nowhere, one second John and Jack are sitting in the waiting room, the next moment the transfer is already in progress — goes from being a muscle-transference process in chapter 1, to suddenly transferring attributes that have nothing to do with muscle, like bone density and height, in chapter 2. Having an AI generate a starting point for a story is fine, but a human editor still needs to check it for basic coherence afterwards.
Anonymous
5/10/23, 11:55 PM
I hope the bullies would come to like what had happened to them :)
5/10/23, 10:46 PM
Had a lot of fun reading this one!
5/10/23, 6:51 PM
Fun stuff. The sight into Chad's head was nice. Still glad its mostly dom top pov, but views unto subs head is great! I hope Dexter will play with Chad's butt, some rimming would be great! :)
5/10/23, 3:25 PM
More please!
Nov 8, 2019
5/10/23, 3:14 PM
OINK!
5/10/23, 2:50 PM
Great story..loving the rubber skinheads!
5/10/23, 2:14 PM
I wonder if the toy was made by the same company that made the serum from your “leaking” story?
5/10/23, 2:09 PM
Loved how the toy had made it so he could get his whole hand inside. Hope this continues. There are so many ways it could go. Will he go back to the shop? Will he contact the toy manufacturer? Will he ask a trusted friend for help?