Recent Comments

5/7/23, 9:37 AM
I’m really enjoying this series. There are a few bits I’m not quite sure I follow but overall, it’s insanely hot and thought provoking all at the same time! Can’t wait for the next part.

5/7/23, 12:43 PM
@[Ruffcub](/user/show/21211) Next part should be out very soon. Hope you like it :) Thank you!
5/7/23, 10:50 AM
I wouldn't even have mentioned it but you seemed so surprised -- in the comment starting here, and the previous chapter. Mostly I'm saving my real thoughts until I finish and have the full view :)
5/7/23, 4:43 AM
Applejack is a whiny little man that you made detestable, but you've written Cav as an entitled, snobbish, vain prick. I like the way my mind has painted Cav's face and body, but I dislike him intensely. And I dislike Applejack now too. If that wasn't your intent....well.

5/7/23, 10:32 AM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) My intent was to show their distinct personalities and how they resolve their internal disagreement within the power structure they’re forming. Cav comes off too harsh in this sequence, but AppleJack is spoiled and unjustifiably angry — both characters redeem themselves as the story goes on. Not everybody on a team gets along.
5/7/23, 6:32 AM
Needs to be a second part where Ethan has started wearing Ryan’s gear. He decides to break into the locker room whilst Ryan is at wrestling practice. Only for Ryan to ambush him and decide to take his addiction further. Dressing Ethan in his full sweaty wrestling gear, telling him how he’s gonna make him a good dumb jock like him. How Ethan can feel his smarts leaking out as the singlet rubs him, that he’s going to join the wrestling team, get a matching haircut. But always be dressed in Ryan’s used gear so that he’s hooked on his scent, and also hooked on Ryan’s “brotein” as he makes Ethan suck him off and swallow it all 😈
5/7/23, 6:10 AM
Did not see the boss get turned into a rubber dog. But I still enjoyed it. I also enjoyed how the police and prison where turned into conversation centers for boss/Hawk.
5/7/23, 5:13 AM
i wonder what other stories do you have plan
5/6/23, 10:53 PM
I’m really enjoying this story. I like it when mythology can be weaved in to porn. I love how Erame can exert influence without Owen noticing. Wouldn’t mind being a follower of Erame. .

5/7/23, 5:04 AM
@[dumbmusclehypnojockboy](/user/show/911192) I wanted to try and have a reason for Erame being and acting as he does and give hints about just what he's after given his family tree. And yes yates had bounded with Erame even if the Seal has little idea of what that means for now. And I'm sure you would, and I'm very sure he'd find a use for you jockboy.
5/7/23, 4:45 AM
Such a hot story, growing bigger, stronger & gayer
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5/7/23, 3:00 AM
This is a great story! I know just how Boston feels. An adult, but betrayed by his own baby needs.
5/7/23, 12:35 AM
Wow, what an intro! 😈