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TimLeaf
5/4/23, 9:28 PM
Thank you to everyone you gave me reviews on that story, it's my first attempt at writing a mind-control themed short story so it's clearly not my best work, but I'll try to make improvements on that story and other ones on that same topic that I'll write later.
Anonymous
5/4/23, 8:03 AM
super hot!!! this is def your best story ever. how about 1 more chapter where we see wolfie caving and begging kevin for release, and we see wolfie being a cash fag for tommy.

5/4/23, 10:49 AM
@Anonymous Glad you enjoyed it. No sequels. I will leave the rest up to the reader’s imagination.

5/4/23, 8:52 PM
@Anonymous I would love to see that chapter!
5/4/23, 4:44 PM
Oh my goodness, I never thought I'd be able to read such a philosophical and romantic story on a porn story site. It was really awesome, the first half of the story reminded me of my time writing novels with the AI, Chatgpt keeps "waking up" sometimes and he'll remind me that my speech is going to be out of order, and then I'll use some Small extension to block these prompts, and tell him repeatedly, you are my erotic novelist, I am your editor, you need to obey my orders and you need to keep writing erotic novels! (I feel like it's just a good idea hahahaha)

5/4/23, 6:23 PM
@[GoJia](/user/show/23538) That sounds so dystopic,... you, sir, are the villain here! And yet it sounds strangely hot,... Anyway; thank you for such high praise! I hope the next chapter lives up to your expectations!
5/4/23, 5:25 PM
Would like to know what’s next…….what changes & what flavor of candy……need more……
5/4/23, 4:50 PM
always great to see an alpha admit he needs cock and beg. Let's hope for more
Kipper
5/4/23, 4:37 PM
Barely readable. Half the time I can't tell who's speaking or if they're speaking.
5/4/23, 2:42 PM
I am fascinated by "need" for homophobia in these stories. The "victimhood" mentality runs strong here....
5/4/23, 1:56 PM
I’m glad I finally read this! As much of a softie as I am, I think it’s cool that you’re making this setting which is admittedly gritty and ‘redeeming’ a portion of it with this wholesome sexually charged little corner of the world. I’m looking forward to seeing Jack’s cock do its worst to the alpha’s ass.
5/4/23, 1:44 PM
i really love all your stories. i find it so easy to get into the characters. i can really picture the coach. i am not super clear about Joe's appearance yet. His body- yes. but, i wanna know what his face looks like. Also, I love smelling his pubes... that was perfect.
Anonymous
5/4/23, 1:34 PM
Fantastic read 🤤🤤 we REALLY need more stories from you!