Recent Comments

Kipper
5/3/23, 11:13 PM
I'm enjoying this salaciously wicked story, but I'm a bit confused about bleachers in a high school locker room. Also, on what set does a writer call a scene wrapped?
mic
5/3/23, 11:07 PM
fucking hot, please write more
nobody
5/3/23, 5:25 PM
mythicdays3 gives me a "code does not exist" error

Martin
5/3/23, 6:23 PM
@[nobody](/user/show/930612) It's "mythicdays30" (with an 0 at the end)

nobody
5/3/23, 10:53 PM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) cool, thanks!
Apr 24, 2023
Charles Ian
5/3/23, 10:50 PM
Great story, as always, Boss.
5/3/23, 10:19 PM
Amazing, I love the theme of physically weaker guy dominating stronger one.
5/3/23, 10:17 PM
Oh how fun and interesting. I like this a lot. Nice start. Nice set up. I also like the cute factor of the characters and hope that stays. The mention he hypnotized his parents is a nice lead in to them not noticing his actions while supporting him. I hope Chad's going to get a better more happy life as a good boy. Very cool stuff. Hope Chad is made to show off his butt and hole, and I hope Chad is the bottom and our berdy master is a top. Good story. Nice start!
5/3/23, 8:16 PM
I love this story. I love drones. I love rubber. I love mind control. I’m getting mad cyberman vibes (my favourite’monsters’ from doctor who) where Todd is the sexy, kinky, sadistic cybercontroller

5/3/23, 8:47 PM
@[SlaveBoyJG](/user/show/10017787) The story is loosely based on the "Rise of the Cybermen / Age of Steel" 2 parter lol. Glad you're enjoying!

5/3/23, 8:52 PM
@[Kyle Cage](/user/show/1756274) OMG! I knew it! That has two be my favourite two-parter. Loving it!

5/3/23, 9:10 PM
@[SlaveBoyJG](/user/show/10017787) Of course, there's no doctor to save the day this time hehe.

5/3/23, 9:42 PM
@[Kyle Cage](/user/show/1756274) I was more of a Matt Smith Stan anyways…hehe. I’m so hyped to read the ending to this. Incredible storytelling, mate!
5/3/23, 7:35 PM
So... Now that there's a writers strike, any chance this "reality series" might come back to fill the void? (wink, wink)
Kipper
5/3/23, 6:58 PM
You are correct. This chapter is nearly impossible to read, and it's not just the voice to text. Luke appears in a room he never entered, which has two men, no three men. Some sentences seem out of order, and suddenly there are horseshoes! We can't tell whose nipples are whose. Was there actually an outline? There are several disconnects. It seemed like a good idea, but I agree the pacing is off, and it's difficult to determine what is going on. UPS. Man. Yes, That's where we've suddenly landed with no reference. Maybe. It got worse when he presumably arrived at Jack's home. Why publish a first draft that obviously needs a proofreader and an editor?
Anonymous
5/3/23, 6:53 PM
I would be nice to have the context But instead oh having the classic situation that the victim is unaware of the changes He has totally free will and still wanting to be his daddy's fuck toy