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5/4/23, 7:48 AM
Are you planning to come back to this story? Just reread it and I still love it
5/4/23, 5:34 AM
> I wasn’t human in this moment, I was a fucking cum whore and didn’t care who knew it. I object. Cum whores are people too. It's this kind of stereotype that perpetuates the objectification of cum whores everywhere. :kissing_heart:
User24431
5/4/23, 4:51 AM
Interesting story, but you messed up characters names and rolls. It's not clear in most parts, who is actually acting. David/Derek? Context, semantics, its hard to tell, who is actually meant
5/4/23, 4:10 AM
Really great start. Some little things that an editor could help with but did not detract from my enjoyment of the chapter at all. Excited to see where this goes!
5/4/23, 3:27 AM
Basic and wonderful. Impossible not to appreciate.
5/4/23, 3:19 AM
Excellent start. Might want to get an editor for a bit but definitely good.
5/4/23, 2:10 AM
Wish there was s pt 3 and four
5/4/23, 12:53 AM
The nerd (+younger) controlling the jock, I love it.
5/4/23, 12:30 AM
Finally, a handsome batman
Kipper
5/3/23, 11:13 PM
I'm enjoying this salaciously wicked story, but I'm a bit confused about bleachers in a high school locker room. Also, on what set does a writer call a scene wrapped?