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Anonymous
5/3/23, 6:53 PM
I would be nice to have the context But instead oh having the classic situation that the victim is unaware of the changes He has totally free will and still wanting to be his daddy's fuck toy
5/3/23, 4:32 PM
Goldilocks & the Three Bears. It practically writes itself. :)
5/3/23, 1:32 AM
Was kinda hoping this was planned by the company and he would have been picked up and caged / collected like a total goonmonkey.

5/3/23, 4:23 PM
@[Jamiemboy](/user/show/10005561) Exactly. Maybe after collecting him they use him to test other versions of their formula. Who knows what could happen?
Elm
5/3/23, 4:14 PM
Another one of my favorite haha, Soo good!
5/3/23, 3:49 PM
Awesome world you’ve created.
5/3/23, 3:15 PM
Okay,WOW. This gets interesting, I wanna see how this goes
5/3/23, 2:25 PM
No worries Can be hard to breaking writers block. Just do your best Is always nice to see new xharacters. Especially a beefcake to take command over Sanjay <3 And never say no to a hypno scene
5/3/23, 12:23 PM
Slow down the story and allow David to react to the changes In general for readability avoid having protagonists with similar names as even the writer will end up confusing them. E.g. "Recently, David made a schedule for David’s new workout sessions. "
mic
5/3/23, 11:21 AM
so fucking hot, love it, more tricking manipulating , would love to have such a roommate, hope he holds the sub in chasity after losing a bet