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Anonymous
5/3/23, 5:31 AM
Hot
5/3/23, 3:15 AM
Something new with Matt's power. He just made Rob and Luke fall in love with each other. And i agree with the other commenter, i hope its not a foreshadowing with Jared. Matt and Jared is the endgame couple.
5/3/23, 1:18 AM
I'm both really excited to see what happens next & sad to see this cum to a end. Hope the last chapter will be hot.
5/3/23, 1:02 AM
Well now that the boss has not only control of Bruce Wayne’s assets. But also control of Bruce/Goon. So now all I want to know is what is next form the boss?
nycboot
5/3/23, 12:49 AM
It's been so long I was afraid I'd lost the momentum of the story. But no, you brought it back so wonderfully, SQ. I gotta admit, this chapter is bonkers, but I'm still with ya. I keep thinking at the end, everyone is going to be "straight" again except for Cart and Brook who are now going to express their feelings for each other without magic. :)
Kipper
5/3/23, 12:35 AM
Excellent work, Master! You have convinced them all of your immeasurable talents, and indeed the endowment of your skill. I noticed minimal typos and one missing word (ch2?). Above all, you have crafted a wonderful world, and your descriptions of sensory transformations are some of the best I've read. Your "Twilight Zone" overhead view bookends are also appreciated. I might have considered that Damien's, "Fuck you," might result in his muscular buns nestling Master Tom's cock under the table, while Sam dined. Was it a choice to have zero fucking until the diner orgy? I would have thoroughly enjoyed more chapters before your alternate ending. I suppose a narrative with those sexy house dolls (I do enjoy a redhead on occasion!) would likely have been backstory or a flashback - perhaps, a YEARS EARLIER chapter or two regarding how they were harvested. I am a great fan of a potential "savior" stepping in to rescue our victim from peril, only to find that only Doom awaits him. I did briefly consider that Sam might beg Master Tom to become his willing companion and partner, without succumbing to the corn. Of course, this would require Sam too abandon his heterosexuality. That would pose a stumbling block. I look forward to reading any other work you've written, because this one definitely served up a hefty amount of creamed corn! With splashes of spunk covering me, your faithful servant
Sep 27, 2007
5/2/23, 11:53 PM
Just found this again on ‘random’. One of my all time favorites.
5/2/23, 10:36 PM
Hoping for more of this soon!
Lampshade15
5/2/23, 9:21 PM
Another good chapter with a very interesting twist at the end!