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5/1/23, 9:15 PM
This is an absolute trip.

5/1/23, 11:01 PM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) Cheers! Hope you enjoy the ride ;)
Martin
5/1/23, 9:12 PM
Amazing, really amazing. I didn't expect this. Your story is pressing so many of my kinky nerd buttons, it's almost unreal. And Kevin is like my teenage self...

5/1/23, 10:57 PM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) Thanks Martin! Glad you're enjoying it :)
4/29/23, 7:46 PM
I had no idea where this story would go. As all your stories, it was well written, but I found this one to be very sweet. Wonderful job!

5/1/23, 7:03 PM
@[dumbmusclehypnojockboy](/user/show/911192) Thanks for that. It performed so underwhelmingly. I'm glad it reached someone!
Kipper
5/1/23, 6:32 PM
Yeah, the writing makes it pointless to read. There's no structure or syntax, making it all impossible to follow. Good premise, though! Would be worthwhile if you had an editor go through what you meant to write.
5/1/23, 4:45 PM
This chapter was so sexy and interesting. Matt is finding new ways to use his powers in the best way. The way they sent Jared off was so rude and ominous, I hope that it wasn't foreshadowing for something serious. I pray that my sweet cinnamon roll will be okay.
Nov 26, 2007
5/1/23, 4:24 PM
Thank you for this story. Such a hot fantasy.
5/1/23, 1:43 PM
Awesome stuff. Maybe you could do Aladdin, where he decides to stay with the genie instead? :)
Anonymous
4/30/23, 9:07 PM
The mind reading was simple, but effective! Surprised more stories don't use it. The relationship between Erame and Yates, and Yates' conquests provides a layered power dynamic that's also pretty neat.

4/30/23, 10:00 PM
@Anonymous Thank you. I wanted to start Yates abilities off slow with Erame in the wings to push his Seal to do more-he's already hinting at what else Yates can do. The power balance between Erame and Yates as well as Yates corruption (or resisting temptation) is very much planned to be the over arching story.

Anonymous
5/1/23, 12:01 AM
@[sirjocktrainer](/user/show/949652) I tend to prefer stories with corruption over total enslavement, since the push-pull aspect of gaining power at the expense of freedom just gets me going for whatever reason. So I'm definitely looking forward to what happens in this story

5/1/23, 4:14 AM
@Anonymous Well, there will likely be total enslavement as well, just not Yates. But I do hope you enjoy the story as it continues

Anonymous
5/1/23, 7:21 AM
@[sirjocktrainer](/user/show/949652) Oh believe me, I wouldn't be here if I didn't enjoy a good enslavement story too. But that's what's great about the layered setup -- it's the best of both worlds!

5/1/23, 1:04 PM
@Anonymous And both worlds we will have. I am looking forward to writing chapter three.
Joe
5/1/23, 11:32 AM
Two cracker stud quarterbacks sacked and bitched AND Fagged for life is awesome. Those two boi-toi white sluts are now queered and loving it.

5/1/23, 12:45 PM
@Joe Thanks for taking the time to comment.
Apr 29, 2023
Anonymous
5/1/23, 12:16 PM
I love the idea and set-up. But I also wonder how the transformation happened. Which cuts does Bravo give to his customers now? What were other consequences regarding his social life? How does he feel about short or military hair now?