Recent Comments

5/1/23, 7:34 AM
i dont want it to end but im excited and anticipating the next chapter :hot_face: :woozy_face: is there a way to set up alerts for new chapters being released on here? *edit* never mind.. i can "subscribe" to the series but apparently that means a paid membership
5/1/23, 7:18 AM
Very soon we will half a year with no update. Any news?
5/1/23, 6:07 AM
Hansel and his sister, but the sister is a femboi, and they become obsessed with the witch/wizard’s cake and jizz?
Nov 14, 2020
5/1/23, 5:23 AM
Amazing pacing. What a great slow burn.
5/1/23, 4:28 AM
So good, and really looking forward to more. 😈 Is Yates an SO3 in your imagination, or something higher? Given his newness to the team and his insecurities I imagine he's not yet reached First Class, and has probably cross rated, eh?

5/1/23, 4:56 AM
@[NeedControlling](/user/show/1223696) Good to know more people are looking forward to more. As for Yates' rank, I did a few web searches and found that ranks for Seals span E-3 to E-9 so I picked something near the bottom but not the very bottom which is why he's Petty Officer Yates. (The idea of calling him Seamen Yates was temping but....) Beyond that I couldn't decided if I wanted him third class or second so I didn't decide and have just called him Petty Officer. I'm not sure when or if it will come up but I'll deal with it as it does. As for cross rated, I had to look that up and no, I have not given that any thought so it won't likely come up.
4/30/23, 11:11 PM
Please please please. Let it be a happy ending. I still want to see Allan Dom both of them at the same time, Cody in a puppy gear and Xander being a dominant but caring boyfriend. I agree with Jade, it s also one of my favourites, as there is just not enough stories with switches. I myself am similar to Allan, but a little less submissive, so this story just clicked in for me when I read it. If only I could have 2 BF like him. Hah, in my dreams. But thank you for writing and updating again. I literally put this whole series to reread and you just conveniently provided another chapter. I loved it.

5/1/23, 3:22 AM
@[Iriefall](/user/show/10019488) I think that one of the things that is interesting about the series is that all three characters are kind of finding out things about themselves so you'll just have to see how things go.
5/1/23, 2:36 AM
The idea of turning fairy tales sexy is endlessly hot to me and I'm so glad you did this one! I'm a sucker for huge fucking cocks and you delivered in spades, and the parallelism to the original story was great. Also dig your boldness, letting the bites draw a little blood, super hot. Good shit all around; I'll be watching for more.
Jul 3, 2022
5/1/23, 2:10 AM
I loved this story, I think it was absolutely perfect. I hope you write more bator focused stuff like this in the future!!
5/1/23, 1:00 AM
It's clever, very well paced and without much, you make us care about our protagonist. I always find your stories so very creative and full of heart, and you've done it again, Mr. Kudos!
Mike Davis
4/30/23, 11:37 PM
This is such a hot story.