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4/29/23, 1:48 PM
A bit confused by Erame / Eros name or identity switch

4/29/23, 3:11 PM
@[Morph](/user/show/919635) as it should be given it's a typo, why it only happened for that small chuck I can only blame late night writing and speak to text not saying names very well. But it has been fixed, thanks for letting me know.
Kippers
4/29/23, 2:57 PM
This chapter could benefit from some proofreading and editing. 😉
Apr 29, 2023
4/29/23, 2:49 PM
thanks for your constructive comments @Hypnothrill looking back you are right - thanks for the feedback. Happy if you are able (if you do get the time )to do as you suggested
Apr 29, 2023
4/29/23, 1:24 PM
This feels like an outline for a terrific story, but in its current state, it doesn't turn me on very much. For me, the thrill of the drone story is the loss of humanity and individuality that occurs. But aside from Matt (who gets a bit of characterization at the end) none of these guys emerge as distinctive individuals; it's like they're basically drones already, so their conversion carries no erotic charge. If I had more time right now, I'd love to flesh this story out a bit with more dialogue and character details, so that we'd really feel the thrill when the flesh turns to rubber.
Apr 30, 2023
Tim
4/29/23, 11:03 AM
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4/29/23, 9:02 AM
Hi everyone! Hope you're all still enjoying the story. You'll notice that I'm sprinkling in some specific kinks that have been requested, while still staying true to my original style. It's really been helping with the writer's block that I usually struggle with! As always, feel free to comment and subscribe to my Ko-Fi if you want early access to the next chapter. Jordan actually finds a way to have a little more fun with his stepdad in that one ;) (Ko-Fi.com/beautemps)
4/29/23, 8:24 AM
These stories are hot as hell! Hopefully there would be dumb service tops as well. Cam and ted are such an amazing, dumb but cute characters. Will be waiting for more chapters!
Martin
4/29/23, 7:24 AM
The master of romantic love stories which feature those steamy hot sex scenes has struck once again! :smiling_face_with_three_hearts: :drooling_face:

CasualWanderer82
4/29/23, 8:21 AM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) Thank you! I'm just doing what I can to get the juices flowing. 🤷‍♂️😜
4/29/23, 5:32 AM
So far this continuation feels like a rewrite of the first portion. I really enjoyed the first portion, but am eager to see where this story will differ.
4/29/23, 4:58 AM
How old is Jon in this?