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4/29/23, 7:11 PM
As always another hot chapter. Love seeing a teacher fall to a formal student. Hope to see a muscler guy get turned.

4/29/23, 8:44 PM
@[Redcoma100](/user/show/41857) Thank you :) Who knows... maybe the next chapter might have one ;)
4/29/23, 8:23 PM
Wow, this is really good. Had to give a comment since nobody has yet!
mikegay4u
4/29/23, 7:14 PM
Great and sexy. I love this story.
10/29/22, 9:11 PM
Love reading about superhero getting turned into gay sluts for the villeins. Hope to see more.

10/30/22, 9:57 AM
@[Redcoma100](/user/show/41857) Thx!!

mikegay4u
4/29/23, 7:11 PM
@[Redcoma100](/user/show/41857) :stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye:
4/29/23, 5:15 PM
Is this a preview?

4/29/23, 5:40 PM
@[Notsolong](/user/show/10036757) Yes and no 😃 I wrote it as a stand-alone story, but now it seems likely it will be the spine of the next novella after Control.
Kippers
4/29/23, 4:34 AM
You had me at "nauseated." How many writers do we have to suffer through, who don't know they're nauseous? Then you paraphrased Nietzsche! I haven't even gotten to the sex yet, and I have such an intelligent erection, I had to zoom on down here to tell you I want to bend over for you! LOL Well, I'd better keep reading before you impregnate me. Especially since I'm 95% top!

Throne
4/29/23, 3:16 PM
@Kippers Hello, Kippers. As far as nauseous vs nauseated, I defer to the site Grammarly. They point out that, 'in everyday modern usage', the two words can both be used the way I used nauseated. In formal situations, your rule would apply, but I prefer to keep my tone more informal. As far as the Nietzsche reference, it gets employed a lot and I thought it was appropriate for the mindset of a character who I saw as a bit of an intellectual snob, but with him neglecting to remember the word 'gaze'. Hope you enjoy the rest of the story.
4/29/23, 1:48 PM
A bit confused by Erame / Eros name or identity switch

4/29/23, 3:11 PM
@[Morph](/user/show/919635) as it should be given it's a typo, why it only happened for that small chuck I can only blame late night writing and speak to text not saying names very well. But it has been fixed, thanks for letting me know.
Kippers
4/29/23, 2:57 PM
This chapter could benefit from some proofreading and editing. 😉
Apr 29, 2023
4/29/23, 2:49 PM
thanks for your constructive comments @Hypnothrill looking back you are right - thanks for the feedback. Happy if you are able (if you do get the time )to do as you suggested
Apr 29, 2023
4/29/23, 1:24 PM
This feels like an outline for a terrific story, but in its current state, it doesn't turn me on very much. For me, the thrill of the drone story is the loss of humanity and individuality that occurs. But aside from Matt (who gets a bit of characterization at the end) none of these guys emerge as distinctive individuals; it's like they're basically drones already, so their conversion carries no erotic charge. If I had more time right now, I'd love to flesh this story out a bit with more dialogue and character details, so that we'd really feel the thrill when the flesh turns to rubber.