Recent Comments

Zander
4/28/23, 8:27 PM
I really look forward to continuing. The story is good, I hope you don't quit)
Tim
4/28/23, 7:39 PM
I initially wrote this story to post on my Tumblr (choose-yourchange) but it quickly got taken down, so here it is. If you want me to write the continuation of this story in a specific way, don't hesitate to tell me, I love receiving reviews on my story.
4/28/23, 6:11 PM
That was excellent

4/28/23, 6:21 PM
@[GiveInToTheMusk](/user/show/909380) Hey thanks, man
May 22, 2015
mic
4/28/23, 5:35 PM
fucking hot, more, want such a friend too
4/28/23, 1:24 PM
Hmmm🤔 interesting. If possible next chapter please.
Jack
4/28/23, 12:18 PM
Good story Thanks
2/24/23, 2:35 AM
It's not like you didn't telegraph this from the start, to some extent, but I still was thrown by it. I kept imagining it going in another direction. But the thing I love about this story is how well you've created these three characters and the small supporting cast. It's just almost a sexual balm, when usually I throw myself into much darker scenarios. I love the darker stories, don't get me wrong, but you're an excellent writer _and_ there's a lovely optimism in your work. It's unique.

4/28/23, 5:51 AM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) Oh thank you so much. Yeah the thing is I actually did have the nanite angle figured out from the very first story so I was able to weave a lot of foreshadowing in. I think there's a hint about the near field communication effect in part two when they pass in the hallway. Oh it was really hard sticking that in without making it stand out. The next part is about half written, has multiple sex scenes and a huge shock that should leave everybody just angry at me for not writing faster. :rofl:
May 12, 2018
4/28/23, 2:45 AM
So so so love this story. So sexually hot n so arousing.
4/28/23, 2:26 AM
Can we please get the next chapter?
4/27/23, 8:43 PM
Hot first chapter!! You wasted no time getting into it!

peachy
4/27/23, 10:22 PM
@[James Heller](/user/show/907806) thanks i loved writing this one!