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4/28/23, 6:11 PM
That was excellent

4/28/23, 6:21 PM
@[GiveInToTheMusk](/user/show/909380) Hey thanks, man
May 22, 2015
mic
4/28/23, 5:35 PM
fucking hot, more, want such a friend too
4/28/23, 1:24 PM
Hmmm🤔 interesting. If possible next chapter please.
Jack
4/28/23, 12:18 PM
Good story Thanks
2/24/23, 2:35 AM
It's not like you didn't telegraph this from the start, to some extent, but I still was thrown by it. I kept imagining it going in another direction. But the thing I love about this story is how well you've created these three characters and the small supporting cast. It's just almost a sexual balm, when usually I throw myself into much darker scenarios. I love the darker stories, don't get me wrong, but you're an excellent writer _and_ there's a lovely optimism in your work. It's unique.

4/28/23, 5:51 AM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) Oh thank you so much. Yeah the thing is I actually did have the nanite angle figured out from the very first story so I was able to weave a lot of foreshadowing in. I think there's a hint about the near field communication effect in part two when they pass in the hallway. Oh it was really hard sticking that in without making it stand out. The next part is about half written, has multiple sex scenes and a huge shock that should leave everybody just angry at me for not writing faster. :rofl:
May 12, 2018
4/28/23, 2:45 AM
So so so love this story. So sexually hot n so arousing.
4/28/23, 2:26 AM
Can we please get the next chapter?
4/27/23, 8:43 PM
Hot first chapter!! You wasted no time getting into it!

peachy
4/27/23, 10:22 PM
@[James Heller](/user/show/907806) thanks i loved writing this one!
4/27/23, 4:18 PM
A note from the Approver team, this is not currently linked to Chapter 1, since the two chapters have different series names. Also, for clarity, will the Patreon chapters eventually be posted on GSS? If not this series will have to be listed as a sponsored story.

mcbaer
4/27/23, 8:26 PM
@[Norismo](/user/show/2849185) As you can see I am posting them over time.

4/27/23, 8:56 PM
@[mcbaer](/user/show/102227) That's wonderful, I just needed clarification and for you to link the two chapters before it could be approved :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:
4/27/23, 5:43 PM
Honestly i think i am into a kinder form of service with significant but not total power exchange. I can't decide whether i hate this story more than Nico hates his Master. But like Nico's confused feelings about his Master and his new life, i am confused about how aroused your story makes me feel. The idea of your story with its total power exchange captures my imagination, draws me in, and excites me as much as it scares me. I love your descriptions of Nico's emotional reactions to his Master's cunning rantings and His keen understanding of how His one-sided conversations manipulates Nico's mental state. I am both happy and confused about your ending the story at that point, but excited that you have written many more stories. I am off to read more of your work. I think i perhaps i need to thank you for such an enthralling story, but not sure whether it implies an admission. Would it indicate i may have taken a step closer to my acceding to a deeper and deeper power exchange?

4/27/23, 7:41 PM
@[boi98229](/user/show/10027285) I’m glad my story is able to connect with you. So glad you enjoyed!