Recent Comments

5/20/25, 2:45 PM
Seems like Andrew might be a closet case that would be in need of a Daddy's Helping Hand.
Ithalo
5/20/25, 3:42 PM
actually, i really liked it! so good.

lukas pucci
5/22/25, 1:49 AM
@Ithalo thanks dudeeee hahaha
5/20/25, 4:46 PM
I hope the final outcome is that the alliance has got rid of the control of boss, but it has not got rid of its own desires.
5/20/25, 5:09 PM
This a random thought, but is your story by any chance inspired by The Magnus Archives podcast?
5/20/25, 5:25 PM
I'm just glad that you have kept the story going. And damn what a good one. Really enjoyed the part with Brad and Dylan. And I'm really eager to see what type of drone Dylan will become. And the constant struggle within Luke was well done. Going back and forth, knowing something was wrong but unable to fight it. Just will happen to Ryan now?
5/20/25, 5:33 PM
Overall this was a hot story that I enjoyed reading, though maybe you tried to fit too much into one instalment? Personally I’d have liked to see the takeover of the school drawn out a bit. Marcus went from suspicious to willing participant very quickly for example. It would have been hot seeing him keep having run ins with the chavs and slowly starting to crave the smell of the TNs. Another discrepancy was the wholehearted participation of everyone else post conversion other than Alex. He seemed to still have reservations and be conflicted at quite a few different points. As I said though. Hot stuff! Love the premise and a lot of the visuals.
Elm
5/20/25, 6:35 PM
Im really liking the story so far, the AI touches are barely noticiable, it's very well edited! I adore stories with tons of physicality like this one. The fact that it includes both an oblibious daddy and feet makes it doubly enjoyable!
5/20/25, 7:14 PM
Очень интересная история
5/20/25, 7:24 PM
Soooo excited to have You back and to see how the new drone figures into things