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Sebastián Apollo
4/27/23, 2:40 AM
Wonderful work, Charlie! Definitely a change, though a good one, from your typical JPS works! I especially appreciated the twist at the end - both of Jack's hung nature and Ethan being an Alpha-Omega. It seems the two were meant to be, and I'm looking forward to see where this goes. Keep it up!
4/23/23, 5:28 PM
Woooooooof!! Very, very hot!!

4/27/23, 2:38 AM
@[Bound_Up_Boy](/user/show/907887) <3 Thank you.
4/23/23, 3:55 PM
This is so incredibly well written nd paced. Great work

4/27/23, 2:38 AM
@[Stroppy Author](/user/show/227812) Thank you for this comment. Your note about the pacing and writing felt really good to read. I hope you enjoy the final chapter/s when I get them up.
Kippers
4/27/23, 2:12 AM
The micropenis and 10-12-in dongs again? No one in your stories is between this range. The sexual degradation of a racist is once again a major plot device. It's all growing predictable in the worlds you create. Poor grammar and misuse of idioms are also evident. Do you understand what "to high heaven" means? It means reaching a distance into the celestial sphere, such as a rising noxious odor, not a gradient of pain. A proofreader and an editor would be of great assistance to you.
4/27/23, 2:01 AM
So hot! Definitely subscribing to your Patreon!!!
4/27/23, 1:00 AM
Loved the chapter, really can't wait to read and jerk off to the next one! Was excited to hear that you were delving into gay werewolf stories, while making it your own by incorporating elements of JPS. I hope Ethan fucks more than one Alpha-Omega in this series, but if he just messes around with Jack that's completely fine with me.
Kippers
4/26/23, 11:59 PM
The overuse of hyperbole became annoyingly distracting. Exponential enhancements also made no sense. A racist character is one thing, but having a black character proclaim, "take my chocolate rod," only implies the author's own racism. A 14 x 9 x 9 penis? You really think that imagery made your story better? As it seems you are still writing, I hope you take these editorial criticisms to heart. The plot of your story had great merit, but it took three readings to get through this chapter, with the nonsensical ever-increasing enhancements to the victims.
4/26/23, 10:41 PM
This story has so much potential. Given that it’s now directly the Eden Academy, there’s lots of possibilities to tell the influence it has had to the men of that world. Big guys all over the word that are alumni of the school that know how to submit and serve. Just plenty of possibilities to introduce characters all over that can interact with the MC, or have the MC see for himself the joy in others’ submission.
4/24/23, 11:26 PM
Excellent start, you're hitting all the best triggers within the diaper fetish. :blush:

4/26/23, 9:29 PM
@[amul](/user/show/10003734) Thanks man! Since this chapter was pretty slow I tried to really accentuate the embarrassment of the whole situation, make it a little bit of a slow burn. Glad its hitting the right notes for you! :grin:

4/26/23, 9:44 PM
@[EKXD](/user/show/10012322) You know I'm an absolute sucker for diapers + medical humiliation!
4/26/23, 8:34 PM
I am IN LOVE with this story lol

4/26/23, 8:46 PM
@[ForgottenCradle](/user/show/911705) Thanks 😁