Recent Comments

4/27/23, 9:47 AM
tell me this wasn't the ending! there has to be more right?

4/27/23, 9:50 AM
@[musclejunky](/user/show/10019676) There sure is, mate.
TheOne
4/26/23, 1:12 PM
Another great part :) Love that all the chapters are coming so quick! The wrestling part was super hot, and clark being a cumdumpster was a great idea. Love them slapping eachothers asses, maybe reintroducing the teacher would be hot or others :p

4/26/23, 7:44 PM
@[TheOne](/user/show/10018186) I'm glad you and everyone else have been enjoying the chapters. I do have an idea for the next chapter but I think I can work in a teacher, if not that one, into the story nicely.

TheOne
4/27/23, 9:29 AM
@[Podoki](/user/show/10019051) Sounds good!
4/26/23, 7:39 AM
A great chapter. Fantastically paced and with an intriguing mystery. The gate code actually got me to laugh out loud, so kudos for that.

4/27/23, 6:59 AM
@[MattyJ](/user/show/10032090) An aloud laugh is a huge compliment, as much as intrigue and good pacing. Thank you! I hope you enjoy what is to come for Matt (No relation). ;)
4/24/23, 12:39 AM
This is a great chapter! I especially love the trick for remembering the gate code and the falling-over-triangle-next-to-a-pole bit in the cafe. You've also done an amazing job pacing the changes and along them evident to us. I also loved the use in plain sight in Daniel's office -- really hot stuff, especially coupled with Matt's previous imaginings! Haha, I know that I need a break too because the thought of Matt not finishing his audit before he lost himself to all this was stressful!!! Looking forward to more!

4/27/23, 5:45 AM
@[time.to.occur](/user/show/1662851) I was proud of the gate code so glad you enjoyed it. And delighted the falling-over-triangle part came across well. Use in plain sight is a fun dynamic that needs to be used more, in my opinion. ;) Thank you, my friend, for your feedback.
4/23/23, 5:40 PM
OK, so either the house just naturally turns people into himbos and they just overestimated how much time Matt had, or the smoke almost killed him and they have him the mark to save his life. Interesting dynamic, with one of the himbos being the "boss" and able to hold onto their smarts if they try hard enough. Interested to see what's really happening.

4/27/23, 5:44 AM
@[BlindSeer0](/user/show/381024) You're on the right track with at least one thing you mentioned. Thanks for commenting, I love your theories and hope you enjoy where it ends up.
4/27/23, 4:00 AM
Amazing
4/27/23, 3:29 AM
Omg!! What a hot intense story. Love it from the begging. This is the kind of stories I love!. You have to continue it, please!!
Anon
4/27/23, 2:46 AM
This is SO hot. And well worth the wait. I honestly am so excited to see how the other Dads will be affected by this.
Sebastián Apollo
4/27/23, 2:40 AM
Wonderful work, Charlie! Definitely a change, though a good one, from your typical JPS works! I especially appreciated the twist at the end - both of Jack's hung nature and Ethan being an Alpha-Omega. It seems the two were meant to be, and I'm looking forward to see where this goes. Keep it up!
4/23/23, 5:28 PM
Woooooooof!! Very, very hot!!

4/27/23, 2:38 AM
@[Bound_Up_Boy](/user/show/907887) <3 Thank you.