Recent Comments

PradyChan
4/25/23, 6:04 AM
I don't usually comment on the stories here. But my gods, this is literally a gold mine of a story. I've read all the chapters, beginning to end multiple times now. And keep checking if you have more updates. Masterful storytelling. Hyper intriguing plot lines. Well Fleshed out characters. Kudos. Bravo. All that good stuff.
4/25/23, 5:38 AM
Did not expect for Alfred to get turned into a rubber drone/pup. Now I can't wait to see what happens with Bruce.
4/25/23, 3:57 AM
No next chapter?! I need more!
4/25/23, 3:55 AM
I was totally ready for the client to receive his reward … again frustration! I’m now beginning to think none of the experience is real it is all mind control … fantastic twist!
slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
4/25/23, 3:30 AM
Always good to see a young Dominant take control of an older slut!

4/25/23, 3:51 AM
@slavethruhypno@yahoo.com I agree :)
4/25/23, 3:14 AM
HOT story! Can't wait to see where it goes next!

4/25/23, 3:51 AM
@[Taylor](/user/show/2690062) Thanks for reading!
rwriter51
4/24/23, 10:05 AM
Sammy Parker just keeps getting hotter through the years. I think Eden is the perfect high school for him, a place where he can truly come into his own. He can do so much more here than he could have in public school. Anyways, those are my impressions. Definitely a 5-star story.

4/25/23, 3:51 AM
@[rwriter51](/user/show/10008532) Thanks man, am glad you're liking it!
4/25/23, 3:31 AM
Hot start … you have the client begging for release … please write Chapter 2
Anonymous
4/25/23, 3:00 AM
Well this is certainly sappier than the other ending...which is pretty cool, honestly! Usually on GSS I tend to check my empathy and ethics at the door(the "price of admission" if you will), but after Innocent's awakening, I admit I started to get a little invested in the brothers as actual characters instead of just vehicles to kinkiness. And now with this chapter you actually managed to make me fear for Innocent's wellbeing. A parasitic alien suit's wellbeing -- imagine that! I do suspect that, despite the plethora of stories where fiendish mind controllers end up enslaving everyone, there are a lot of closeted romantics on the site. Hopefully I'm not totally off-base with that. In any case, I think a "happy ending" where the protagonist goes off to live with his harem of spandex-controlled boytoys is still sufficiently twisted for all but the most sadistic kinksters.
Ben
4/24/23, 3:45 AM
Keep coming back to this one ;) 🔥 🔥 🔥

4/25/23, 2:01 AM
@Ben Thanks!