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4/24/23, 3:31 PM
Thank you for a great series! It's a very sweet, positive message, very well written and very hot! I also share all those fetishes and wish I could alternate between being each one of your characters :)
Apr 24, 2023
4/24/23, 3:10 PM
Great story, for once the bad guys win!
4/21/23, 6:51 PM
So I really enjoyed this. Any kind of VR or mind-transfer theme gets to me. Probably why I saw the original Avatar about 25 times. That and I lusted after Jake’s Na-vi body. Glad there will be more. Curious as to at what point the original Kevin separated from the AI version. After he used up his credit? And was the Carter he played with an AI copy from Carter? There doesn’t seem like anything nefarious is going on, other than the theft of “intellectual property “ in the form of the non-consensual copies the company is making of the guests. Looking forward to more.

4/21/23, 9:09 PM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it so far :) You're spot-on so far too. The AI versions of Kevin and Carter were made as they each logged out. The Carter one was already running by the time Kevin met him since the real Carter had been gone for hours already. Somewhere, the original AI of Carter will have gone through a similar 'awakening' as Kevin's AI did. And, as for any 'nefarious' goals,... right again! Curare isn't an organisation with any twisted goals in mind. They're just a business. Maybe that's worse, since they don't even acknowledge their blatant disregard for the rights of those they're pillaging for profit. And that's not even counting the implications of subjugating AI with human level development and emotional range.

Anonymous
4/24/23, 3:01 PM
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Kippers
4/24/23, 2:59 PM
Definitely a story worth continuing, with both attorneys encouraging colleagues and clients to see this doctor! I would have preferred more detail in Billy's revenge fuck of Timmy's little bum bum, sliding his hairless cock into that boyhole. Perhaps, even Timmy reveling in the feeling of a nice juicy cock pumping him. Also, some more detail in the nursery might have been nice. Perhaps the nice nurse could powder the widdle boys' bald pussies, before they strain to expel the other colleague's hot seed. Of course, that's what diapers are made for! If there is no one to clean up your cummy cunt with their tongue, you'll need something to absorb the gooey goodness. Maybe after nap time, they could lick their diapers clean. Definitely, definitely a story worthy of more chapters. I love the full awareness of what the attorneys find themselves forced to do. 😉
4/24/23, 6:50 AM
This is by far the best story on this site. Thanks for sticking to it. I can not wait for the conclusion. Now we clearly see the difference between the to sides, between control and care, but there still is a sizeable loophole. Blake even says here that he kinda likes his dad to be so in control. I also really like the ending. Tanners influence is not something that can so easily be reversed. I found this part particularly enticing_: "After Sunday, you won’t be plagued by these doubts ever again. You’ll see your purpose clearly and be galvanized by it, I promise"_ I am very curious to see what kind of pastor he will be and what kind of church we will have when all this is done.

4/24/23, 12:53 PM
@[Lytcom](/user/show/602531) Aw, thanks! I really appreciate readers like you sticking through to the end. And you’re right—Peter could very well be the rock a whole new kind of church is built on. Not too long before we’ll find out!
4/24/23, 8:00 AM
This is one of my favorite of your works. I remember reading it ages ago on Nifty or maybe your old blog. The rimming 🥵🥵🥵🥵
Anonymous
4/24/23, 6:41 AM
This was so great and Im so glad you said youre continuing it
4/24/23, 6:22 AM
Love when a hero gets turned to the dark side. Can't wait to see what the boss ha in store for. Batman with Hawks help.
4/24/23, 6:22 AM
Great story. Forced conversion, rubber, skinhead...what's there not to like?
4/24/23, 5:30 AM
Matt, you say? Hmmmmmm. Intriguing start. Can't wait to read part two.