Recent Comments

5/20/25, 5:25 PM
I'm just glad that you have kept the story going. And damn what a good one. Really enjoyed the part with Brad and Dylan. And I'm really eager to see what type of drone Dylan will become. And the constant struggle within Luke was well done. Going back and forth, knowing something was wrong but unable to fight it. Just will happen to Ryan now?
5/20/25, 5:33 PM
Overall this was a hot story that I enjoyed reading, though maybe you tried to fit too much into one instalment? Personally I’d have liked to see the takeover of the school drawn out a bit. Marcus went from suspicious to willing participant very quickly for example. It would have been hot seeing him keep having run ins with the chavs and slowly starting to crave the smell of the TNs. Another discrepancy was the wholehearted participation of everyone else post conversion other than Alex. He seemed to still have reservations and be conflicted at quite a few different points. As I said though. Hot stuff! Love the premise and a lot of the visuals.
Elm
5/20/25, 6:35 PM
Im really liking the story so far, the AI touches are barely noticiable, it's very well edited! I adore stories with tons of physicality like this one. The fact that it includes both an oblibious daddy and feet makes it doubly enjoyable!
5/20/25, 7:14 PM
Очень интересная история
5/20/25, 7:24 PM
Soooo excited to have You back and to see how the new drone figures into things
5/20/25, 8:30 PM
Glad to see you back, keeping us enthralled with this unique story and edging us with these cliffhangers!
5/20/25, 8:42 PM
I know I'm about 10-15 years late commenting here but... yeah... this story started off strong. Quite a bit more grounded than most of the newer stories you read here now. But it definitely went off the rails in the second half ... you might say it got transformed into a train wreck. The pacing sped up so erratically that by the end it seemed ike the narrator just wanted to be done already from being bored listing to himself read his own book report. The scope lost all sense of boundary and perspective . The finesse disappeared completely and any semblance of sexuality just morphed into "and then he made him a stupid thug and then he made him into his girlfriend and then..."
5/20/25, 9:06 PM
Also, Dylan seemingly changed by taking Brads load. What’s in his load I wonder? Clearly there is something
5/20/25, 9:48 PM
Really well written story! Looking forward to the next part

5/22/25, 8:08 PM
@[liftem](/user/show/360657) Cheers! Gonna submit the next parts tonight.
TEXLAND
5/20/25, 11:03 PM
Sorry it did not turn me on. I have sex with both middle age married familh men and young men.