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4/16/23, 8:57 PM
There is a fantastic mind control story here, between the truly boggling grammatical errors and malapropisms. They don't do this story the justice it deserves. Someone needs to edit this, because it's an amazing classic hypnosis piece.

autoDream
4/23/23, 7:38 PM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) Apologies, I usually just spit these stories out in one sitting, and don't really re read or edit. Just like getting some fantasies out into the world. More of an idea person, rather than a writer perhaps. Haha. But I do appreciate that you like the story <3
4/23/23, 6:54 PM
Great beginnings. Thank you for your efforts, as well as willingness to share with others
4/23/23, 3:57 PM
so hot I need more. What happens if you take the shake and cum in the dude's ass does it make the ass grow?

4/23/23, 6:49 PM
@[nature1490](/user/show/227325) I was thinking the same thing. Jack wouldn't be able to resist Ollie tied up and growing. Pictured Jack slicking up his cock with the protein shake formula and plunging in Ollie's hole. Having him concrete growing and flexing the muscles in his ass for Jack's pleasure.
4/23/23, 5:19 PM
It makes me wonder if the exceptional Amps become chargers and the chargers are rotated to other facilities to prevent them from bonding. So easy tolose bodies in a system. Maybe Rover was a Charger who went wrong, bad, ya know. Wonderful, the story lines you made possible by not giving too much information but still guided thought. Excellent writing
4/23/23, 4:32 PM
So hot. 🔥🔥💦 Thank you!
felix
4/21/23, 10:40 PM
??? Is this an AI-written story? There is a tag for AI written stories (#AI created). Let's not mislead readers, here.

4/23/23, 1:01 PM
@[felix](/user/show/2338654) According to https://copyleaks.com/ai-content-detector at least some parts of this story were ai-generated.
DD
4/23/23, 12:57 PM
Uhm that was a fart. This read more like a synopsis than a story, and where did the character development come from? Someone can build on this for sure.
4/23/23, 11:25 AM
This story about Theo and his roommate is absolutely fantastic!! I LOVE it and I hope there will be a lot of sequels. Maybe there will be some other teammates. Or just Jon and Teddy taking turns during classes in the restrooms. Or Teddy has a game and needs some relive... Or a brother (or - quite naughty - a dad in great shape and with a monster between his legs) during the holidays.... Soooo many opportunities...
4/23/23, 10:06 AM
Wow... I need more of this stuff!! :stuck_out_tongue_closed_eyes:
Anonymous
4/23/23, 9:43 AM
Hot!!!