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Anonymous
4/23/23, 9:43 AM
Hot!!!
Esperance of the Stars
4/23/23, 8:04 AM
This entire story made me ugly sob for half an hour, but it made me think a lot There is suffering inherent in life, that which we all know and have experience with We must always remember to carry compassion in our hearts, and try Oh gods this sounds sappy and I apologize for this screen is still wet with tears, but This series. . . In a way I have to thank you for making me think and ponder. Someday may there be a happy ending for all in this story, but I have a feeling that only hope can provide a satisfying end.
4/23/23, 4:09 AM
Humm I didn't comment on this story? I should have and can now. I really enjoy this story a lot. I appreciate how detailed the writing was with the changes that happened. This story reminds me of my early days of writing on this site. I hope you keep working at it and writing more stories. You have potential.
4/23/23, 3:25 AM
Damn this was hot, hope there's more of Tiny in the next one. 10 out of 10, would jack off to again :thumbsup:
4/23/23, 3:05 AM
Clear, direct writing, which also happens to be wickedly hot. The character development is authentic, leading me to believe you've met these guys. And now, we've met them too.
4/22/23, 9:19 PM
This was a fun, clever, and kind of romantic story. "Leviticus" was an interesting concept, and the way it effected both of them, Bryan much more obviously the first time, and subtly the second, made for a neat contrast. Part of me is wondering if the story even needed the final chapter to explain what happened, like it waters it down knowing the answer to the mystery. All in all, a great job.

4/23/23, 1:21 AM
@[BlindSeer0](/user/show/381024) Originally, I didn't have the last chapter, but a fan (my husband) insisted it was needed. I was happy to write it for him. He now wants a story about Ate.

4/23/23, 2:56 AM
@[Touko](/user/show/10036273) Definitely support a story about Ate.
Jack
4/23/23, 2:51 AM
So hot! 🥵🥵🥵
Aug 26, 2018
Kippers
4/23/23, 2:33 AM
Seems the court isn't aware of the reprogramming. I would have continued here, or in a further chapter that the tormentors find themselves unable to resist cocks. They decline into a life of mindless debauchery, and ultimately prostitution, following the loss of their jobs. They are forced to share a seedy apartment where men rent their sloppy cunts, fucking them all day long, on cum-stained sheets to support their drug habits. After they are arrested by corrupt cops in a sting operation, they are subjected to a gangbang on the way to jail. Kind-hearted Cal visits them, to see them suffering the pangs of withdrawal. Their bodies are deeply bruised in various places from their brutal arrest, and Cal has to suppress his laughter in view of the guards. Overcome with lust, the trio beg others to fuck them repeatedly. As Cal exits the jail, he walks into the sunlight, cackling!
4/23/23, 1:37 AM
I I almost never review middle chapters. That being said, this was the single most hottest chapter I have ever read. Holy fuck! Muscle stuff, poppers, mind control/fucking. Military. Wow! This was just amazing!
4/22/23, 11:39 PM
The suspense is killing me! I'm eager for the next chapter!