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4/23/23, 1:37 AM
I I almost never review middle chapters. That being said, this was the single most hottest chapter I have ever read. Holy fuck! Muscle stuff, poppers, mind control/fucking. Military. Wow! This was just amazing!
4/22/23, 11:39 PM
The suspense is killing me! I'm eager for the next chapter!
4/22/23, 6:43 PM
This one really snuck up on me. The three levels of hypnotic subjects was completely unexpected, and even rather hard to believe you really meant what I thought i was reading. Maybe even more convoluted as my name is also David. Very hot!
Anonymous
4/22/23, 5:33 PM
this story gets hotter and hotter…
4/21/23, 9:37 PM
This was great! Dark... But great!

4/22/23, 5:32 PM
@[GiveInToTheMusk](/user/show/909380) I appreciate it! That is my aspiration here :)
4/22/23, 2:57 AM
I like this story; it's tapping into the legacy of Westworld. There are the tones of Futureworld in the original storyline and the most recent arc of the HBO version. I can see something much darker than Beaner because of those two stories and the darkness they put into the copies of people they make. But I want to see where you take this story and how the AI copies will work into the larger plans.

4/22/23, 5:31 PM
@[New Guy in Town](/user/show/820450) Thanks again! This time I've decided not to make the big, bad company into sinister villains. They're coldhearted and ruthless in their treatment of their otherwise fully sentient AIs, but they aren't on some sort of power-trip towards world domination. That said, they aren't the only players in this game,...
4/22/23, 11:31 AM
Great story, which brings me to the recently very popular chatgpt. I'd love to see more of the story develop with Kevin's copy, or if the real Kevin gets into the game again, what happens to them if he and the fictional Kevin meet again, I'm curious.

4/22/23, 5:23 PM
@[GoJia](/user/show/23538) Glad you're enjoying things! There's certainly going to be some of what you've mentioned coming up, so I hope you like it!
4/22/23, 4:46 PM
Still waiting a part 2 here - great job on this.
Anonymous
4/22/23, 4:01 PM
hot transformation of Rick and loved how the relationship with Jack flipped at the end… wish there was more of their story…