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5/20/25, 8:30 PM
Glad to see you back, keeping us enthralled with this unique story and edging us with these cliffhangers!
5/20/25, 8:42 PM
I know I'm about 10-15 years late commenting here but... yeah... this story started off strong. Quite a bit more grounded than most of the newer stories you read here now. But it definitely went off the rails in the second half ... you might say it got transformed into a train wreck. The pacing sped up so erratically that by the end it seemed ike the narrator just wanted to be done already from being bored listing to himself read his own book report. The scope lost all sense of boundary and perspective . The finesse disappeared completely and any semblance of sexuality just morphed into "and then he made him a stupid thug and then he made him into his girlfriend and then..."
5/20/25, 9:06 PM
Also, Dylan seemingly changed by taking Brads load. What’s in his load I wonder? Clearly there is something
5/20/25, 9:48 PM
Really well written story! Looking forward to the next part

5/22/25, 8:08 PM
@[liftem](/user/show/360657) Cheers! Gonna submit the next parts tonight.
TEXLAND
5/20/25, 11:03 PM
Sorry it did not turn me on. I have sex with both middle age married familh men and young men.
5/20/25, 11:13 PM
I totally binged this series, and it was well worth it, amazing writing man!
5/20/25, 11:15 PM
Thanks for posting another amazing chapter
Anonymous
5/20/25, 11:50 PM
Beautiful addition with the wait.
Anonymous
5/20/25, 11:51 PM
Hope that you are feeling better
5/21/25, 12:04 AM
Author here! I have a ton of ideas of where to take this, both next and further down the line. What I have so far is just an exposition, I promise it will get even more interesting in the next couple chapters. I hope you see the potential. Feel free to drop ideas or tell me what you liked/what could be better going forward!

5/22/25, 5:18 PM
@[Trancinator 5000](/user/show/10061213) Please check out my other story I posted recently, “Simon Says,” if you like straight to gay hypnosis (with a lil twist) as well. I’m proud of that one, hoping future chapters of this one can get up to that quality shortly.