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4/21/23, 9:37 PM
This was great! Dark... But great!

4/22/23, 5:32 PM
@[GiveInToTheMusk](/user/show/909380) I appreciate it! That is my aspiration here :)
4/22/23, 2:57 AM
I like this story; it's tapping into the legacy of Westworld. There are the tones of Futureworld in the original storyline and the most recent arc of the HBO version. I can see something much darker than Beaner because of those two stories and the darkness they put into the copies of people they make. But I want to see where you take this story and how the AI copies will work into the larger plans.

4/22/23, 5:31 PM
@[New Guy in Town](/user/show/820450) Thanks again! This time I've decided not to make the big, bad company into sinister villains. They're coldhearted and ruthless in their treatment of their otherwise fully sentient AIs, but they aren't on some sort of power-trip towards world domination. That said, they aren't the only players in this game,...
4/22/23, 11:31 AM
Great story, which brings me to the recently very popular chatgpt. I'd love to see more of the story develop with Kevin's copy, or if the real Kevin gets into the game again, what happens to them if he and the fictional Kevin meet again, I'm curious.

4/22/23, 5:23 PM
@[GoJia](/user/show/23538) Glad you're enjoying things! There's certainly going to be some of what you've mentioned coming up, so I hope you like it!
4/22/23, 4:46 PM
Still waiting a part 2 here - great job on this.
Anonymous
4/22/23, 4:01 PM
hot transformation of Rick and loved how the relationship with Jack flipped at the end… wish there was more of their story…
Nov 22, 2012
4/22/23, 7:44 AM
It's amazing how much feeling you evoked in me in such a short story. Really well written and terrifying and hot all at once.

4/22/23, 3:21 PM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) Thanks for taking the time to comment. Glad you enjoyed it.
4/22/23, 2:52 PM
Sorry but this is only gonna be a solo chapter, not a series. My last series took so long and so much effort, I wanted to make a quickie this time. :sweat_smile:
Apr 15, 2023
4/22/23, 2:43 PM
Great premise! Can’t wait to see where this goes!
4/22/23, 1:26 PM
Enjoy where this is going...
4/22/23, 12:48 PM
I hope there’s more coming because it was anticlimactic.