Recent Comments

4/22/23, 12:47 AM
What a great gem to find! I loved the descriptiveness of the dom. I did kind of not understand how he was brought under. At first I thought it was going to turn out he'd been Manchurian Candidate, but then maybe it was his eyes, no, the smoke...maybe it was both of the latter, but it's strongly implied that he didn't see his induction coming.
4/21/23, 7:24 PM
This series was very well thought out. I enjoyed all 9 chapters immensely. Entirely hot and held the reader's interest--especially those into gay male leather sex. Thank you for writing this, and I hope to see more of your work in the future.

4/21/23, 11:25 PM
@[ohiobuck47](/user/show/694479) Thank you very much! I enjoyed writing this story so it's nice to hear someone else enjoyed reading it.
4/21/23, 9:45 PM
Loved this story! It got a little confusing at times, keeping track of characters, colors, and Awakened Brothers, but you never lost me. The little details, losing the zipper, etc, were interesting and I wish a little more time had been spent exploring it. (What happens to the hosts? Are they just... "gone"? Some of the Brothers intimated that they were aware of their host's feelings, but what are the long-term ramifications for a host?) Anyway, GREAT story -- really enjoyed the premise.
4/21/23, 8:05 PM
Bravo! A happy ending for Max and for all lover of Spandex. I hope a sequel or even a Maker prequel is in the future!!
4/20/23, 8:11 PM
Kelog is such a carrying hypnotist, treating a family with upmost love and horny. Lovely read Pops!

Anonymous
4/20/23, 10:33 PM
@[MysteryGator](/user/show/2012944) Thank you Pup, If you ever sweat near me and I find it addictive, I expect good treatment.

4/21/23, 7:19 PM
I was clearly logged out when I posted that.
4/21/23, 5:19 PM
Tantalizing start, but that much more disappointing additional chapters haven't been added to the story yet.
4/21/23, 2:24 PM
Any chance of another chapter showing his transformation? 😈
Hob
4/21/23, 1:27 AM
I am so happy the next installment has begun! These types of stories are my all time favorites, and I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter.

benedick543
4/21/23, 1:48 PM
@[Hob](/user/show/136235) thanks for your feedback!
4/21/23, 12:29 PM
An absolutely delicious beginning to what I’m sure is going to be a smorgasbord of a story. I love every element you are cooking with here!!
4/21/23, 12:19 PM
I might just be imagining it, but i like that this is Jackie, not Jack, and that his personality still shines through the dom persona John is giving him.