@Anonymous Thank you for reading my stories. I appreciate it. <3 I didn't add pet play as a tag because the story really doesn't have any in it despite Max becoming Pet at the end. I've read stories tagged Spandex before that barely mention it and I'm very disappointed in them so I don't want to lure people who want to read that kind of story only to get this. However I do leave tags open (cause I also hate trying to figure out what tags to use) so if anyone feels a tag is left out fell free to add it. Travis is 100% foreshadow. I knew I wanted Max to walk in the room of the next to last chapter and see a guy being put into or wearing the last suit after I wrote his chapter. I decided it was going to be Travis because I had used Travis's name in his texting so I went back to include a mention of Travis in every single chapter. I would say that Travis got way more "screen time" than I meant when I made him Carlos's Roommate but Carlos needed someone to talk to at the beginning of his chapter. His conversion is much like Carlos's. He was subdued by Nerd's cocktail and was compliant. Greed put the suit on him so it was more than likely very fast and as soon as Boss was awake he told Greed to get on his knees and that when everyone entered the room. I'm more disappointed that we didn't get to see Jess's conversation. My plan was for them to split up follow one to see his conversion then the next chapter would go to the other hiding and write his conversion. However each chapter in this story is written in 3rd person limited and Rick was the main focal point when I began their chapter. It would have been weird to follow Jess after focusing on Rick for so much of the chapter and then just decided to move on instead of back tracking because it would have been a very short chapter. Who knows I might add a bonus chapter describing the conversion of both boys after I'm finished with other things I'm doing. I do think Jess's would be a fun read and I could probably figure out a way to make Travis's not a rehashing of Carlos's conversion, we shall see.

@[Tommy B](/user/show/10022728) Thanks Tommy. Chapter 2 just got published, 3 and 4 are pending approval and I'll submit 4-8 later this week. Feel free to share comments, good or bad. Pete

@[Pete](/user/show/10036314) I recommend slowing down publishing the chapters a bit. Remember that your series is bumped back to the top of the list each time a new chapter is published. Also consider that people reading your story with their dick out might not be that... patient to read a huge amount of text :)

@[Martin](/user/show/125990) Martin, thank you for the tip. I haven't used this site to read stories before, so didn't realize the impact publishing too frequently could have. What would you recommend? The story has 8 chapters and I think I've published 3 so far. The remainder are ready to go. Are you thinking one new one every 3-4 days? Or longer? Thanks, Pete