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Apr 21, 2023
4/21/23, 8:05 PM
Bravo! A happy ending for Max and for all lover of Spandex. I hope a sequel or even a Maker prequel is in the future!!
Apr 12, 2023
4/20/23, 8:11 PM
Kelog is such a carrying hypnotist, treating a family with upmost love and horny. Lovely read Pops!
Anonymous
4/20/23, 10:33 PM
@[MysteryGator](/user/show/2012944) Thank you Pup, If you ever sweat near me and I find it addictive, I expect good treatment.
4/21/23, 7:19 PM
I was clearly logged out when I posted that.
Jul 4, 2022
4/21/23, 5:19 PM
Tantalizing start, but that much more disappointing additional chapters haven't been added to the story yet.
Apr 21, 2023
4/21/23, 2:24 PM
Any chance of another chapter showing his transformation? šŸ˜ˆ
Apr 18, 2023
Hob
4/21/23, 1:27 AM
I am so happy the next installment has begun! These types of stories are my all time favorites, and I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
benedick543
4/21/23, 1:48 PM
@[Hob](/user/show/136235) thanks for your feedback!
Apr 19, 2023
4/21/23, 12:29 PM
An absolutely delicious beginning to what Iā€™m sure is going to be a smorgasbord of a story. I love every element you are cooking with here!!
Apr 20, 2023
4/21/23, 12:19 PM
I might just be imagining it, but i like that this is Jackie, not Jack, and that his personality still shines through the dom persona John is giving him.
Apr 21, 2023
Anonymous
4/21/23, 5:35 AM
What a journey. It's great to see that Max got another chance to be with Oli -- sorry, Innocent -- even if I'm not a fan of pup/petplay so it's a bit of a miss for me despite the fact that it fits his character(I do suggest adding that tag to the story, though). As far as actual criticism, it does feel a little disappointing that we didn't get to see Travis' conversion, and that there was apparently nothing special about it, considering how much he was built up in the preceding chapters(was that just to foreshadow his possession by Boss?). Everything else was great. I loved the touch with the disappearing zippers, I loved that the remaining fratboys weren't "wasted," I loved that there's a much wider conspiracy going on(I previously assumed that the incomplete sets ended up getting released somehow). Overall this was a really, really fun series and I second being totally onboard with it if you decide to revisit this universe. Of course, having read and enjoyed a lot of your other works, I'm sure whatever you put out next will be great.
Spandexlad
4/21/23, 12:04 PM
@Anonymous Thank you for reading my stories. I appreciate it. <3 I didn't add pet play as a tag because the story really doesn't have any in it despite Max becoming Pet at the end. I've read stories tagged Spandex before that barely mention it and I'm very disappointed in them so I don't want to lure people who want to read that kind of story only to get this. However I do leave tags open (cause I also hate trying to figure out what tags to use) so if anyone feels a tag is left out fell free to add it. Travis is 100% foreshadow. I knew I wanted Max to walk in the room of the next to last chapter and see a guy being put into or wearing the last suit after I wrote his chapter. I decided it was going to be Travis because I had used Travis's name in his texting so I went back to include a mention of Travis in every single chapter. I would say that Travis got way more "screen time" than I meant when I made him Carlos's Roommate but Carlos needed someone to talk to at the beginning of his chapter. His conversion is much like Carlos's. He was subdued by Nerd's cocktail and was compliant. Greed put the suit on him so it was more than likely very fast and as soon as Boss was awake he told Greed to get on his knees and that when everyone entered the room. I'm more disappointed that we didn't get to see Jess's conversation. My plan was for them to split up follow one to see his conversion then the next chapter would go to the other hiding and write his conversion. However each chapter in this story is written in 3rd person limited and Rick was the main focal point when I began their chapter. It would have been weird to follow Jess after focusing on Rick for so much of the chapter and then just decided to move on instead of back tracking because it would have been a very short chapter. Who knows I might add a bonus chapter describing the conversion of both boys after I'm finished with other things I'm doing. I do think Jess's would be a fun read and I could probably figure out a way to make Travis's not a rehashing of Carlos's conversion, we shall see.
Apr 20, 2023
4/21/23, 4:07 AM
This chapter was really intense and I mean it in a good way. The sexual tension between the characters were as thick as it was enjoyable. As an admirer of jocks, I loved how they were used as a catalyst for them to open to each other. The time you spent building up the characters were well-spent. I'm looking forward to seeing use of the bondage tag and learning about who is the dom!
Apr 21, 2023
4/21/23, 3:32 AM
I hope you write more based on this story. I love spandex stuff and body control.