Recent Comments

Apr 12, 2023
NJ
4/21/23, 1:08 AM
Can't wait for the next part. Well done!
4/21/23, 12:33 AM
Well things was a sweet love story chapter. But now that boss has a host what is Max going to do now? What other spandex suit can he put on?
4/20/23, 11:15 PM
From horror to a love story back I hope Max will find a new brother to host
4/20/23, 10:57 PM
Another great chapter, Sir! Wish I could trade places with Ben!
Kippers
4/20/23, 10:15 PM
The creepy deranged family you have created is wicked and perversely hot.
Kippers
4/20/23, 9:19 PM
Such complete loss of control, under the participation of a completely bent class and teacher was an absolute cock blaster! Thanks for the great writing, and ball filling scenario. Can't wait to check out the rest of your work!
Anonymous
4/20/23, 4:08 PM
Amazing start! Can't wait for more. Really loving the slow burn.

Pete
4/20/23, 8:32 PM
@Anonymous Thanks Anon. Chapter 2 got published today, 3 and 4 are pending approval and I'm submitting 4-8 later this week. Look forward to your comments. Pete
4/20/23, 5:50 PM
Never know if authors want to take the reader's ideas and build or just stick with their initial plot and outline. If it's a good story that piques my interest then I picture myself in the situation and what I would do or who I would do. Still reading the series. Maybe my thoughts will allow you to expand. Give the story another little twist and maybe even a tug or two. Thanks for sharing this.
4/20/23, 12:23 PM
Wow. Those are great ideas! I posted all the chapters at once, but it took the admin a few days to review them. Maybe I should have written one chapter at a time so I could've changed direction based on feedback.... oh well. Glad you're enjoying it. Thanks for the feedback.