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4/20/23, 4:05 AM
What a fantastic tale! You paint amazing word-pictures: the detail is rich and vivid without being overcrowded, allowing readers to imagine the world and fill in the gaps themselves. And you also write perfect himbos: cheerful, extremely hot and muscular, and above all kind and welcoming. This is going to be great! :)

4/20/23, 11:19 AM
@[Feed Your Head](/user/show/1170832) Wow. Thank you so much. I really appreciate you writing such lovely and specific feedback. I'm so happy you like the himbos. Yes! They must be happy, hot, and kind. The kindness is needed to be a true himbo. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story to come.
4/20/23, 12:39 AM
I love the mystery of what might be going on here in this house with the urgency of the audit, all these hot men, and the marking on Matt's skin! I also love that Matt is already starting to give into the temptation juuust a little bit. Your descriptions also have me a really good sense of place and how fancy this house is.

4/20/23, 11:17 AM
@[time.to.occur](/user/show/1662851) So many hot men. Mysterious markings. Sometimes we just need an excuse to give in, don't we? Thank you for your guidance and compliments about the place and taking the time to comment.
Anonymous
4/19/23, 3:56 AM
Great start to the story, I'm very excited to see more. I absolutely love dumbing down/himbo stories!

4/20/23, 11:16 AM
@Anonymous Thanks for the comment. I'm glad you like the story so far. More is coming.
4/19/23, 3:41 AM
Nice introduction. It's going to be fun following Max's adventures at the Manor and discover the true purpose of his new birth mark. I hope he gets to keep his brains if he does get hit with the himbo stick. Hot sexy bod and smart enough to help Alexander manage his boys would be a great combo!

4/20/23, 11:16 AM
@[Moo68au](/user/show/919772) I'm sure Alexander would appreciate a helping hand managing the estate and all those boys. Thanks for reading and taking the time to comment.
TheOne
4/20/23, 9:26 AM
Great chapter! The mankini and hank/todd doing eachother was extremely hot, and Clark becoming a buttslut too, there seems to be a repeating paragraph though.

4/20/23, 9:43 AM
@[TheOne](/user/show/10018186) Oof, correcting the double paragraph now, thank you for bringing it to my attention
Wavell
4/20/23, 7:19 AM
Wow I wasn’t expecting a new story from you but I’m more than happy to see it!! I can only hope we get to see a part two in the future soon! Great stuff!
4/20/23, 7:14 AM
You really do the best classic hypnotism sex scenes, though this one story I didn't quite get how the induction happened.
4/19/23, 9:10 PM
Great to read a new series from you! It's great to see another story with altered reality and jumping into downright debauchery in "totally normal" plain sight settings. I quite enjoyed Totally Normal Cafe previously, gradually sinking into uninhibited depravity but yet the controllers still maintain a level of moral conscience and struggle. It gives an understanding that they are still real humans, not just pure sex machines. This time around you seem to jump more right into the corrupted mindset, but still I see that there would still be some personal intimacies and internal struggles in between the power. Looking forward to see how "normal" and "professional" this office will become!

benedick543
4/20/23, 5:17 AM
@[tomozco](/user/show/13902) thank you! I think I really want to highlight those parts because, honestly, if we had the same power in real life, it would be really easy to be consumed by all the possibilities. Giving the controllers more nuance with their moral compass, for me, makes the story more believable and grounded. Glad you liked my approach!
4/19/23, 7:57 PM
When I read the part about the new salad dressing and food seasoning, I couldn't help but remember what I did with a submissive of mine: I hypnotically programmed him to, at dinnertime, become inexplicably very excited and start masturbating, until cum over your food. After spilling his seed over the food, without any memory of the fact, he would sit down and eat normally until the last mouthful, only after that would "the scales" fall from his eyes and he would remember everything, he even ate semen with his food, hahahahahaha

benedick543
4/20/23, 5:14 AM
@[Hypno Brazil](/user/show/10015263) sounds hot! haha
Doopboopdoop
4/20/23, 4:18 AM
It's great to see a LitRPG GSS story, something I've been hoping to come across for a while now. I'm excited to see where the story goes!