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Apr 15, 2023
4/22/23, 2:43 PM
Great premise! Can’t wait to see where this goes!
4/22/23, 1:26 PM
Enjoy where this is going...
4/22/23, 12:48 PM
I hope there’s more coming because it was anticlimactic.
4/21/23, 8:10 PM
Excellent start.

4/22/23, 11:40 AM
@[GiveInToTheMusk](/user/show/909380) Thank you :grinning:
liketoo
8/26/20, 2:33 PM
i love to read more of this stories , Please give us part 2

Anonymous
4/22/23, 9:28 AM
@liketoo I don’t think there’ll be another
Martin
4/22/23, 5:51 AM
Now, this story made me really hard. It's wicked and I hope there'll be an unexpected turn of events down the line, but it's still really hot. It would be hotter if the guys would regain some of their awareness at some point... realizing what has become of them!
4/3/23, 7:23 PM
This was great and ended in the only way it reasonably could have. I never knew I’d missed the ending to this series. Glad someone commented to lead me back here.

4/22/23, 3:16 AM
@[amul](/user/show/10003734) I'm so glad you were able to rediscover it and got to read the ending. I'm doubly glad that the ending resonated with you and felt like it worked for the series! Thanks for taking the time to tell me what you thought!
4/22/23, 2:05 AM
:clap::clap::clap: Very well played sir!!! An inventive take on the recruiting session and whenever I see a uniform being used to instill the desire to wear it I have to give it my props. I too would like to see what boot camp is like for Henry and other recruits Gunnery Sergeant Crashes brings into the fold.
4/22/23, 1:17 AM
A lovely start ! Waiting to read the rest soon
4/22/23, 12:47 AM
What a great gem to find! I loved the descriptiveness of the dom. I did kind of not understand how he was brought under. At first I thought it was going to turn out he'd been Manchurian Candidate, but then maybe it was his eyes, no, the smoke...maybe it was both of the latter, but it's strongly implied that he didn't see his induction coming.