Recent Comments

Kippers
4/20/23, 10:15 PM
The creepy deranged family you have created is wicked and perversely hot.
Kippers
4/20/23, 9:19 PM
Such complete loss of control, under the participation of a completely bent class and teacher was an absolute cock blaster! Thanks for the great writing, and ball filling scenario. Can't wait to check out the rest of your work!
Anonymous
4/20/23, 4:08 PM
Amazing start! Can't wait for more. Really loving the slow burn.

Pete
4/20/23, 8:32 PM
@Anonymous Thanks Anon. Chapter 2 got published today, 3 and 4 are pending approval and I'm submitting 4-8 later this week. Look forward to your comments. Pete
4/20/23, 5:50 PM
Never know if authors want to take the reader's ideas and build or just stick with their initial plot and outline. If it's a good story that piques my interest then I picture myself in the situation and what I would do or who I would do. Still reading the series. Maybe my thoughts will allow you to expand. Give the story another little twist and maybe even a tug or two. Thanks for sharing this.
4/20/23, 12:23 PM
Wow. Those are great ideas! I posted all the chapters at once, but it took the admin a few days to review them. Maybe I should have written one chapter at a time so I could've changed direction based on feedback.... oh well. Glad you're enjoying it. Thanks for the feedback.
4/19/23, 9:27 PM
I love how this story is progressing!

4/20/23, 12:20 PM
@[ohiobuck47](/user/show/694479) This is the first story (of any sort) I've written, so thanks for the feedback.
4/20/23, 4:05 AM
What a fantastic tale! You paint amazing word-pictures: the detail is rich and vivid without being overcrowded, allowing readers to imagine the world and fill in the gaps themselves. And you also write perfect himbos: cheerful, extremely hot and muscular, and above all kind and welcoming. This is going to be great! :)

4/20/23, 11:19 AM
@[Feed Your Head](/user/show/1170832) Wow. Thank you so much. I really appreciate you writing such lovely and specific feedback. I'm so happy you like the himbos. Yes! They must be happy, hot, and kind. The kindness is needed to be a true himbo. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story to come.
4/20/23, 12:39 AM
I love the mystery of what might be going on here in this house with the urgency of the audit, all these hot men, and the marking on Matt's skin! I also love that Matt is already starting to give into the temptation juuust a little bit. Your descriptions also have me a really good sense of place and how fancy this house is.

4/20/23, 11:17 AM
@[time.to.occur](/user/show/1662851) So many hot men. Mysterious markings. Sometimes we just need an excuse to give in, don't we? Thank you for your guidance and compliments about the place and taking the time to comment.
Anonymous
4/19/23, 3:56 AM
Great start to the story, I'm very excited to see more. I absolutely love dumbing down/himbo stories!

4/20/23, 11:16 AM
@Anonymous Thanks for the comment. I'm glad you like the story so far. More is coming.