Recent Comments

5/21/25, 12:04 AM
Author here! I have a ton of ideas of where to take this, both next and further down the line. What I have so far is just an exposition, I promise it will get even more interesting in the next couple chapters. I hope you see the potential. Feel free to drop ideas or tell me what you liked/what could be better going forward!

5/22/25, 5:18 PM
@[Trancinator 5000](/user/show/10061213) Please check out my other story I posted recently, “Simon Says,” if you like straight to gay hypnosis (with a lil twist) as well. I’m proud of that one, hoping future chapters of this one can get up to that quality shortly.
5/21/25, 12:23 AM
Very nice story!! Definitely like that the two develop a relationship of love and not one strictly about control. Thank you for putting this chapter out and showing how Logan first reacted to his musk and how he came to be the person we first meet at the start of the story.

5/23/25, 7:18 AM
@[New Guy in Town](/user/show/820450) Thank you! I loved being able to show where Logan started and how that shaped who he became. Really glad the emotional core came through for you.
CHT
5/21/25, 1:15 AM
Good start! Personally I am big on humiliation so if it goes down that path I will be happy lol

5/21/25, 8:10 PM
@[CHT](/user/show/10025789) There will definitely be some humiliation once he trusts the wrong (right?) people with his situation 😁
5/21/25, 1:54 AM
So enticing as is hot n oh so sexually satisfying. So love Cumming back for good read. Haha
5/21/25, 1:57 AM
Looking good so far. I sent you a message.
Anonymous
5/21/25, 5:44 AM
This sounds naughty
5/21/25, 7:41 AM
Wow! i love mind control stories, and this particular story was so hot it didn't just blow my mind! i love the idea of hypnosis and hypnotic triggers. Having the ex-boyfriend and hypnosis Master show up and take control of the household by using their own hypnosis practice against them is incredibly hot. My only problem with this author is his love of writing very short stories. When i love a story as much as i love this one, i have to have more. Unfortunately i can see from his other stories that they are all only one short chapter. :((
Anonymous
5/21/25, 11:46 AM
did he already vape before? or did that happen as a result of whatever made him smoke the cigar and then seem to like it a lot?

5/22/25, 8:08 PM
@Anonymous Yeah, he would've vaped before, but ut doesn't play a huge part in the story. It was just to flesh out his character a bit more. Thanks for reading.
5/21/25, 12:37 PM
This is a WINNER. I loved it. your tenderness in your writing is very relate-able. THANK YOU.

5/23/25, 7:25 AM
@[MChicago](/user/show/10024403) Thank _you_. I really enjoyed writing this story and this kind of response really means a lot.
2/4/25, 3:23 AM
Amazingly hot, man. Have you ever thought about writing and directing your own gay porn movies. You could make an empire. On a side note, I hope you continue developing a new story line centered on the two cops that fucked the horny boy in the park, with their own juicy dynamics of power and mentorship -brotherhood bro sex. All the best.