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Nov 2, 2022
4/20/23, 3:28 AM
My dick was really hard while reading this, Please give us a few more chapters, I wanna know how peter continues to hypnotise and dominate mark and take him as his sex slave! I wonder if this will become a case of ..... BE CAREFUL WHAT YOU WISH FOR!!!
4/20/23, 3:07 AM
This was really hot. I love how Jerod got his revenge on one of his bully's. Can't wait to read more.
4/20/23, 2:36 AM
Just did a full read of all the chapters to this point. All I can say is. Very hot idea with the spandex taking control of people. Now I can't wait for the next chapter.
Willie Cici
4/20/23, 1:22 AM
I liked it. Good first effort. Keep it up!
4/19/23, 11:58 PM
Is there more? Please be more
4/15/23, 9:05 AM
Congratulations. And thank you. This was an incredible ride and the most creative use of branching paths I've ever seen. To have each path be part of the major story and end result was very clever. Lots of hot sex with a variety of types. Incubus and Gerri definitely win from me. Gerri's comment about just wanting Xavier to be happy melted my little heart. I also love that you had some romance in here and that it ended with a poly finale so everyone can share the love.

4/19/23, 11:45 PM
@[Evan Jackson](/user/show/133763) I'm so glad you liked it — thank you for your incredibly generous comments! I had a lot of fun coming up with the 'branching' premise and the way it would ripple out and affect all the Xaviers at once, and I'm really glad it's been working for readers. 😄 Thank you!
4/19/23, 9:42 PM
I'm really enjoying this series, but as the cast grows, it's getting harder to keep track of everybody. We have to know their name, their color, and what they represent -- that's three ID's per character, multiplied by eight... it's a lot! You've done a good job of keeping everybody straight (pardon the pun), but I wonder if you could help the reader out a little more, refer to their name and their color, or their spandex ID. It gets a little confusing when you just use their frat name. Example, I know there's a Dustin, but I had to scroll up and look at the chart to know he was Statue, and that's gold, right? Honestly, this story is a lot of fun -- I'm really enjoying it -- and my comments are meant to be helpful.
4/19/23, 9:31 PM
Just read the first 3 stories in this series. Thanks for the hard on you got me dripping. My mind is wandering if Kevin is the evil genius behind all the sexy fun. Did John never really exist? Did he hijack Jack in order to create John to turn his boss. Did Kevin meet Jack in a bar and was he rejected or used and discarded? The possibilities are endless in this world. Maybe John did exist and his muscles were a result of his first night under Kevin's control... Please continue my cock is wanting to get into a bottom of this mystery.
4/19/23, 9:05 PM
Excellent Chapter! Can't wait for the next one
Ome
4/19/23, 5:22 PM
Very fun yo tx stimle goes furry. I guess less drugs he doesn't really use like sf magi- nvm txtx!lmfao