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HypnoMutt
3/29/23, 3:25 AM
Really nicely done from start to finish. You wrangled a huge cast of characters and kept them all straight (so to speak) in my mind even during the grand explosion of synchronized cumming, no small feat. When you recover enough to write Fred's further adventures, I hope you'll consider taking the kink further into BDSM and hardcore play - you hinted at some intriguing fetish development and it would be fun to see what you could come up with. Thanks for a great ride.

benedick543
4/19/23, 7:25 AM
@HypnoMutt Thank you! I really made it a point to keep everyone easy to track so no one gets lost in the story, and I'm glad it worked! BDSM isn't really my thing and I don't have enough experience and working knowledge of it, but I'll try to incorporate some elements of it in the sequel!
3/26/23, 9:21 PM
Loved this epilogue. You wrap up everyones story nicely, even with some having a "bad" ending. I hope you decide to do a sequel with either as Fred or an anthology of people using the device.

benedick543
4/19/23, 7:18 AM
@[DJeiKier](/user/show/10021357) Thank you! And yeah, I really wanted to show nuances in the endings and suit their fates based on their interactions with Fred and Mark. Oh, and the sequel is already up! I've published the first 2 chapters and more will follow soon!
3/26/23, 7:48 PM
Loved the epilogue. It was great seeing the effects long term. Thank you!!

benedick543
4/19/23, 7:17 AM
@[James Heller](/user/show/907806) Thank you!
4/19/23, 4:25 AM
I love this! I love gooning. I hope we get to read more soon.
Takanashi
4/19/23, 3:57 AM
Amé cada uno de los párrafos, me gustaría leer más sobre está historia.
4/18/23, 7:38 PM
You have a phenomenal way with words. I’m so so happy you’re continuing this story and sharing it here. Such a big big fan! So eager for more!!! Very excited for potential emotional changes forced on his crush…maybe making the crush very mutual even though he’s presumably straight 😜

benedick543
4/19/23, 2:17 AM
@[EdIam](/user/show/17145) Thank you so much! What I'm planning is that with every chapter, even as Fred uses MindX to control different people and aspects in his office life, he'll learn bits and pieces of information about Tom (he'll actually make a startling discovery in Chapter 3, which would push him over the edge to take action against his office bullies! lol), then eventually, well, we'll see what happens with their relationship lol Again, I really appreciate your feedback!

4/19/23, 2:49 AM
@[benedick543](/user/show/10034418) How exciting!!! I love that you have a nice roadmap for your story. Thoroughly impressed and excited for more. So much so that I’m feeling inspired to work more on my own!
Anonymous
4/19/23, 1:59 AM
Really wanna see how this ends!
Anonymous
4/18/23, 9:13 PM
Yess a continuation of the series :partying_face:

4/19/23, 1:39 AM
@Anonymous Thanks! I always planned to continue the truth or dare tale, I'd hoped that other members here might have added to this story too, or any one willing to try, it's open to add to for community members!
PussyDestroyer
4/19/23, 1:15 AM
Can’t wait for the next chapter! :)
Sep 28, 2021
4/16/23, 10:41 AM
This is an awesome work. I hope you give us a second part really soon :smile: Is Chad enhanced in some way? Like peach'd for studs or something?

4/19/23, 12:37 AM
@[Esper](/user/show/464795) Thanks! This is a stand-alone (I never even gave the main character a name), but I'll probably write more stories in this world at some point. I have at least one in drafts. While I didn't bother making it explicit, I did picture Chad being on an Eggplant equivalent of Peach for tops that makes him more hung.