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4/19/23, 9:05 PM
Excellent Chapter! Can't wait for the next one
Ome
4/19/23, 5:22 PM
Very fun yo tx stimle goes furry. I guess less drugs he doesn't really use like sf magi- nvm txtx!lmfao
4/19/23, 4:04 PM
Great to see that yoy created a spinoff/sequel for MindX. And do i see some relationship blooming with Tom and Fred? I hope so. And i cant wait for the revenge to the bullies. And maybe more office shenanigans. But i hope the office doesnt have any cameras, and maybe Fred goes to fix that problem if ever (maybe involving a mind controlled security)

benedick543
4/19/23, 4:17 PM
@[DJeiKier](/user/show/10021357) Woah, wait what? You are pretty spot on with a lot of these with the roadmap I have haha keep an eye peeled for those plotlines!
4/19/23, 3:25 PM
Hi, Looking forward to more in office testing. Hope to see Joe, Steve, and Ryan, Get a tasty lunch, too

benedick543
4/19/23, 3:31 PM
@[robbotg99x4you](/user/show/141754) Oh you can definitely count on Fred to test MindX in every inch of that office! and don't worry, the office bullies will get their due!
4/19/23, 2:46 PM
Hi, Thank you for more. I look for the sequel.

benedick543
4/19/23, 2:49 PM
@[robbotg99x4you](/user/show/141754) oh hi! I've already posted the first part of the sequel! more on the way! glad you enjoyed this series
1/24/23, 9:36 PM
Je commente jamais mais en tant qu'arabe, je dois dire que je déteste ton histoire. Je l'avais déjà vu sur un site français, et j'ai le déplaisir de la retrouver ici. Elle ne fait que déshumaniser, fétichiser rabaisser et ostraciser le "rebeu", qui n'est qu'après tout que bête sexuel, quel que soit le statut social auquel il peut bien prétendre. Pfff, banquier ? Non non, ce n'est qu'une apparence qui dissimule à peine la véritable nature bestial de l'homme de couleur. Produit d'une culture barbare qui fait entrer les jeunes garçons dans la virilité à travers la douleur... Bref je ne pense que tu sois raciste ou quoi que ce soit, et oui je sais que c'est du fantasme, mais chez les gays y a tellement un délire de fétichisation que j'ai rencontré des types pas nets dans la vraie vie ou sur internet, qui te voit comme leur petite tranche d'exotisme ou leur idéal biscornu d'une certaine virilité qu'ils se construisent dans leur tête. (lol je m'attends à une volée de bois vert, j'en ai rien à foutre d'avance les fantasmeurs)

HYpnomade
4/19/23, 1:22 PM
@[moi950](/user/show/2705190) Je ne suis pas arabe mais pourtant je suis d'accord avec toi. Ce récit est raciste en plus d'être désagréable à lire. En tant qu'hypnotiseur je suis dégoûté par ce récit. Je ne suis pas contre de la fantaisie sans consentement (c'est de la fiction) mais là y a rien qui me plaît
4/19/23, 6:02 AM
Sweet new chapter to this story. I'm kanda excited to see how the truth will effect others. The truth is what ever will happen. It will be sexy to read.

4/19/23, 7:52 AM
@[Redcoma100](/user/show/41857) Thanks, I'm excited too, lol. The truth is, what ever Jake says it is, lol.
3/28/23, 7:18 PM
Nice! I hope, Also. I am really curious to see what Fred will get in to with his Mindx pairs. So love MC and seeing how every one ends up, after a year or more. I love to be Under that control. It is for me the greatest feeling you can have. Thank you for a great story.

benedick543
4/19/23, 7:28 AM
@[robbotg99x4you](/user/show/141754) Thank you for your feedback! I've already published the first part of the sequel, with more to come!
HypnoMutt
3/29/23, 3:25 AM
Really nicely done from start to finish. You wrangled a huge cast of characters and kept them all straight (so to speak) in my mind even during the grand explosion of synchronized cumming, no small feat. When you recover enough to write Fred's further adventures, I hope you'll consider taking the kink further into BDSM and hardcore play - you hinted at some intriguing fetish development and it would be fun to see what you could come up with. Thanks for a great ride.

benedick543
4/19/23, 7:25 AM
@HypnoMutt Thank you! I really made it a point to keep everyone easy to track so no one gets lost in the story, and I'm glad it worked! BDSM isn't really my thing and I don't have enough experience and working knowledge of it, but I'll try to incorporate some elements of it in the sequel!
3/26/23, 9:21 PM
Loved this epilogue. You wrap up everyones story nicely, even with some having a "bad" ending. I hope you decide to do a sequel with either as Fred or an anthology of people using the device.

benedick543
4/19/23, 7:18 AM
@[DJeiKier](/user/show/10021357) Thank you! And yeah, I really wanted to show nuances in the endings and suit their fates based on their interactions with Fred and Mark. Oh, and the sequel is already up! I've published the first 2 chapters and more will follow soon!